Month: February 2024

Collaborative Poem: The Great Escape

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Today’s collaboration is with my tween daughter, and I guarantee this poem will make you burst out laughing. If you’re curious about all the excitement or experiencing a bit of FOMO, don’t worry. Check out the post below and join the conversation.

Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

Today, I’ve teamed up with my 12-year-old daughter, Miss.M, once again to craft a comical poem, a stark contrast from the one we created at the start (read it here) of this initiative.

We had a blast and laughed until our stomachs hurt while penning this poem. Honestly, it was all in good fun, with no rhyme or reason behind it.

However, ChatGPT’s analysis takes it to the next level by highlighting an undertone of satire. Check it out at the end of this post. So, without further ado, let’s dive into the poem.

Collaborative Poem - The Great Escape

I had once farted,
A big-bang that it started
Spread till the café in America
Ruining everyone's caffé mocha,
Making people go mad at me-
I then put on my shoes, ready to flee,
Sprinting across countries
To land in a land
Where I have no one to appease
And can fart just at ease...

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem offers a humorous and lighthearted take on a seemingly embarrassing situation—the speaker’s fart causing chaos in a café. The use of comedic exaggeration, such as describing the fart as a “big-bang” and its repercussions spreading across countries, adds to the whimsical tone of the poem.

Despite the initial embarrassment and the anger of others, the speaker decides to flee the scene, putting on their shoes and sprinting across countries to find a place where they can fart without inhibition. This journey symbolizes a quest for freedom from societal norms and expectations, where the speaker seeks refuge in a land where they feel no pressure to conform.

Overall, the poem entertains with its playful language and absurd scenario while also touching on themes of individual autonomy and the desire to break free from societal constraints. It offers a humorous commentary on human behavior and the lengths to which one might go to escape judgment and embrace personal freedom.

That’s a wrap for today! If you’re someone still on the fence, wondering if you can write poetry, or thinking that poetry is a serious affair requiring a lot of effort, then I’m sure this poem will change your perspective. It’s time to let go of your fears and have fun penning poetry.

To see your masterpiece showcased here, click here to get all the details!

Happy Poetrying!!

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Collaborative Poem: Punctuating Life

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Today’s collaboration is an anonymous one, and I’m thrilled to share it with you! If you’re curious about all the excitement or experiencing a bit of FOMO, don’t worry. Check out the post below and join the conversation.

Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

Today’s collaboration is an anonymous one, and I must say I enjoyed the way the poem turned out. The verses capture an emotion that many of us can relate to—love and longing. So, without further ado, let’s dive into the poem.

Collaborative Poem -Punctuating Life

In the state between wakefulness and sleep
You happen to be my dearest dreams
A dream never come true...
Chasing mirages are my only memories-
An oasis in the dull and drab of life
Love, what keeps you alive?
Just two fingers crossed for days that come by,
Marriage of dreams & destiny, a sweet lullaby...
No thoughts of what ifs
When full stops can dance into semicolons in a punctuating life...

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem delves into the realm of dreams and aspirations, exploring the intersection between imagination and reality. It begins by describing a state of liminality—between wakefulness and sleep—where the beloved exists as a cherished dream, yet one that remains unfulfilled. This unattainable dream is likened to a mirage, symbolizing the ephemeral nature of desires and memories.

The speaker reflects on the role of love in sustaining hope and vitality amidst the mundane aspects of life. Despite the challenges and uncertainties they face, the speaker maintains a sense of optimism, symbolized by the metaphor of crossing fingers for better days ahead.

The imagery of marriage between dreams and destiny evokes a sense of harmony and acceptance, suggesting a willingness to embrace life’s journey with all its twists and turns. The reference to punctuation marks like full stops and semicolons metaphorically represents the fluidity and potential for change within the fabric of existence.

Overall, the poem conveys a sense of longing and introspection, exploring themes of love, hope, and resilience in the face of life’s uncertainties. It invites readers to contemplate the delicate balance between dreams and reality, and the transformative power of imagination in shaping our perceptions and experiences.

That’s a wrap for today! Share your thoughts about this initiative, this poem, or any others featured so far. Your feedback will help me improve and reach more people. Let me know in the comments section—I’m all ears!

Meanwhile, if you want to see your masterpiece showcased here, click here to get all the details!

Happy Poetrying!!

Collaborative Poetry: Look out for the Gods

Today’s collaboration is a thoughtful one, and I’m thrilled to share it with you! If you’re curious about all the excitement or experiencing a bit of FOMO, don’t worry. Check out the post below and join the conversation.

Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

Kids never cease to amaze me with their grasp of life, and capturing their thought processes in verses is a beautiful journey that I thoroughly enjoy. Blessed with such an experience is this lovely poem by a tween girl.

This poem is a collaboration with Nidharshanaa, an enthusiastic 12-year-old passionate about art and craft. Alongside her creative pursuits, she enjoys singing, dancing, and diving into books—a recently discovered hobby. Time to get inspired by her poem!


Collaborative Poetry - Look out for the Gods

A suitable house to live, a nice dress to wear, are all my needs to live peacefully
A house filled with hugs & a dress with linen of love makes me live more happily!
Alas, across the road, I see people longing for a dress to escape from the cold winter
Where are their clothes & what gives them shelter?
Oh God, why do you make them suffer like this? What did they do wrong?
Or is it just part of a bigger plan I know not of? Yet, it feels just so wrong...
So I treat them as God; extend my hand to fulfil their needs
B'coz people say you can witness God's smile when you do good deeds...
It's always a great day for me as I get blessings from many Gods in my area
To experience the joy I feel & earn some blessings, look for Gods in your area!

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem explores themes of gratitude, empathy, and the interconnectedness of humanity. It begins by highlighting the speaker’s simple needs for a suitable house and a nice dress, which they believe are sufficient for a peaceful life. However, upon witnessing the struggles of others less fortunate, the speaker’s perspective shifts.

The contrast between the speaker’s contentment and the suffering of those across the road prompts questions about the nature of God and the reasons behind human suffering. The speaker grapples with the apparent injustice of their situation and questions why some people must endure hardship while others live comfortably.

Despite these existential queries, the speaker chooses to respond with compassion and action. They extend a helping hand to those in need, viewing their acts of kindness as a way to serve God and alleviate the suffering of others. This reflects a belief in the interconnectedness of humanity and the idea that helping others is a pathway to spiritual fulfilment.

The poem concludes with a message of hope and encouragement, suggesting that by seeking out opportunities to help others, individuals can experience the joy of giving and receive blessings in return. This underscores the idea that acts of kindness have the power to create positive ripple effects and foster a sense of community and goodwill.

That’s a wrap for today, and I’m sure you’re feeling as inspired as I am. While adults often get caught up in various philosophies, kids simply live life their way and show us the purpose of life through their simplest actions. Don’t you agree?

On that reflective note, if you want to see your masterpiece showcased here, click here to get all the details!

P.S. While collaborating with the kiddo today, I received certification from her that I do write poetry well! Pretty cool, right? It got me pumped to engage in more collaborations! See you soon with another poem!!

Happy Poetrying!!

Collaborative Poetry: Midnight Marvels

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Today’s collaboration is a special one and I am so excited to share it with you! If you’re wondering what all the buzz is about or feeling FOMO, fret not. Check out the post below and join the conversation.

Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

You might accuse me of bias, but I can’t help it—I’m always brimming with excitement when collaborating with kids. Their playful energy is contagious, and what better way to unleash it than through poetry?

This poem is a collaboration with Aadya Sreenivas, an enthusiastic 11-year-old who thrives on learning new things and adores art and craft. She shares that practising Bharatnatyam keeps her relaxed. Let’s take a quick dive into her poem!

Collaborative Poetry - Midnight Marvels

Twinkling little stars- shining up in the sky
You look so happy, oh tell me why?
Moon- so high, shining bright & looking white
Tell me your secret for feeling so happy & light...
Talking with stars every night, dear moon,
Do you make up faces like a comical cartoon??
Hey stars, do you always go ha ha ha
When the moon goes blah blah blah?
Stars & moon, you make me happy
Lifting up my mood, even when I feel crappy!

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

This poem captures a whimsical dialogue between the speaker and celestial bodies—the twinkling stars and the shining moon. The speaker marvels at the apparent happiness and brightness of these celestial objects, prompting them to inquire about the secrets behind their joy.

The imagery of the stars twinkling and the moon shining high evokes a sense of wonder and admiration. The playful tone of the poem is reflected in the speaker’s light-hearted questions, imagining the moon making faces like a cartoon and the stars laughing in response to the moon’s chatter.

Despite the simplicity of the conversation, there’s a deeper emotional resonance underlying the interaction. The speaker finds solace and happiness in the presence of these celestial beings, which serve as sources of comfort and upliftment during times of sadness or low mood.

Overall, the poem celebrates the beauty of nature and the sense of wonder it evokes, while also highlighting the simple joys found in connecting with the world around us, even if it’s through imagined conversations with stars and the moon.

That’s a wrap for today! I’m confident this delightful piece of poetry has sparked joy and ignited your sense of wonder and playfulness!So, what are you waiting for? Reach out to me now—your masterpiece could be featured here tomorrow!

And if there are kids in your vicinity, share this with them and encourage them to collaborate. I’ll be there for them (and you too, if you need help!) every step of the way. Let’s infuse poetry into our daily lives. Are you ready?

If you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details!

Happy Poetrying!!

Collaborative Poetry: The Pillion Rider

Hello, hello! Loving how each #CollaborativePoetry brings surprises as I collaborate with another person. If you’re wondering what all the buzz is about or feeling FOMO, fret not. Check out the post below and join the conversation.


Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

This poem is in collaboration with, Smt.Saradha Vishwanathan. She’s a dedicated HDFC Life Executive Planner channelling all her earnings into social services, striving to uplift communities one policy at a time. Moreover, she is a lively and an optimistic person. Click here to connect with her.

Collaborative Poem - The pillion rider

The witness of birth, life and death is one and the same,
Where a flower blooms, the leaves wither,
Also, where flowers bloom, so does hope...
What am I looking at- death or revival? surrender or survival?
Life is forever, in search of new expressions-
Once I believed, now mere witness to fading expressions...
So stand without desire and fear
Every experience a life lesson, oh dear!
Yes, behind all that moves, leave all unto Him.
Be the pillion rider, for He shall navigate the bumps.

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem delves into themes of life, death, hope, surrender, and spiritual faith. It begins by acknowledging the cyclical nature of existence, where birth, life, and death are intertwined. The imagery of a flower blooming and leaves withering illustrates this perpetual cycle of creation and decay. Despite the inevitability of death, the poem also highlights the concurrent presence of hope whenever new life emerges.

The speaker reflects on the ambiguity of their observations, questioning whether they are witnessing death or revival, surrender or survival. This uncertainty mirrors the complexities of life and the myriad emotions that accompany its various phases.

As the poem progresses, the speaker contemplates the transient nature of life and their evolving perspective. They transition from active participation in life to a more detached role of being a witness to its fleeting moments. This shift in perspective is accompanied by a sense of acceptance and equanimity, as the speaker learns to stand without desire and fear, embracing each experience as a valuable lesson.

The poem culminates with a surrender to a higher power, symbolized by the reference to “Him.” This surrender is not a resignation but an acknowledgment of divine guidance and providence. The metaphor of enjoying the pavilion ride underscores the idea of relinquishing control and trusting in a greater plan, even amidst life’s inevitable challenges and uncertainties. Overall, the poem celebrates the cyclical nature of life while advocating for acceptance, resilience, and faith in the face of its mysteries.

That’s a wrap for today! What are your thoughts on this initiative? Does it pique your interest in poetry? Is there anything else you’d like to know or suggest for future additions? Share your perspective on this poem in the comments below!


Also, if you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details!

Happy Poetrying!!

Collaborative Poetry: Becoming

Hello, hello! Kicking off the #CollaborativePoetry initiative on a high note as the previous blog post about it has clinched the top blog award from the Blogchatter community. Check here.


Before you dive into the first collaborative poetry, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day.

This poem is in collaboration with, Shubhangi Shukla. She’s an Indian woman on her journey to redefine what it means to be a woman. She helps other women overcome mental, emotional and energetic blocks, rediscover who they are beyond family and work obligations, and become their most confident and empowered version. Check out her business profile, here.

Collaborative Poetry: Becoming

Sitting cross-legged between yellow walls
The canvas of my mind breathes
Blue skies and beautiful white clouds...
Nascent wings of my feminine, flutters
Is this ALL to life or is there more?
Do canvases turn concrete or expand too?
Am I moulded or can I become HER?
The boundless beauty that I dream of-
Ambitious. Persevering. Sincere. Whole. Love.
Breathe into life, breaking the yellow wall!

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem explores themes of self-discovery, ambition, and the quest for personal transformation. The speaker begins by setting the scene, describing themselves sitting amidst yellow walls, which can symbolize confinement or limitation. However, amidst this confinement, the canvas of the speaker’s mind is depicted as expansive, filled with imagery of blue skies and white clouds, suggesting a desire for freedom and transcendence.

The speaker then reflects on the potential of life, questioning whether there is more beyond the confines of their current existence. This introspection leads to a consideration of personal growth and empowerment. The mention of “Nascent wings of my feminine” suggests a burgeoning sense of identity and agency, particularly in the context of femininity.

The poem’s central question—whether the speaker is merely moulded by their circumstances or capable of transformation—underscores a desire for self-realization and fulfilment. The speaker aspires to embody qualities such as ambition, perseverance, sincerity, and love, envisioning a boundless beauty that transcends limitations.

The concluding lines evoke a sense of empowerment and liberation as the speaker’s aspirations breathe life into existence, breaking through the metaphorical yellow walls of constraint. This suggests a transformative journey towards self-actualization and the realization of one’s full potential.


How did you find this collaborative poetry? If you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details! Let’s create magic through collaborative poetry!

Happy Poetrying!!

CollaborativePoetry – Let’s Create Poetry Together

Poetry?? Poetry!!!

Did you know that there are poetries with just one word? Or that famous poems can be as simple as a post-it note on a refrigerator? And here’s the kicker – there’s a heap of nonsense poems out there, taken seriously and all!

Did you know that my debut in poetry was an epic saga about a mosquito, then a cockroach, and shockingly, it made its grand debut in my school magazine? And hey, guess what? You, yes you, can write poetry too! Mind-blowing, right?

Hey there! I’m Seethalakshmi, also known as Preethi. I’ve got a background in Mathematics, but took a wild turn into the world of poetry a few years back, even though I never studied literature. And guess what? You can dive into poetry too!

In my journey with poetry over the past few years, I’ve noticed that many folks feel poetry is reserved for the elite, sophisticated, or artsy types. But that’s just not true!

Poetry is for everyone—for you and me to every person out there. We’ve been surrounded by poetry since birth—through lullabies, sing-songs, rhymes, prayers, classical tunes, movie songs.

So, how do you get started?

To make poetry a more integral part of our everyday lives and bask in its beauty, I’m planning a little something called #CollaborativePoetry. Yep, you heard it right!

You and I can team up and create poetry together. How cool is that? Let’s bring some poetic magic into the world, one collaboration at a time!

#CollaborativePoetry Guidelines

So, without further ado, let’s dive into the guidelines:

  1. There are no rules when it comes to poetry. Come on… poetry is all about breaking rules and having fun, right? So, there’s absolutely no restrictions on theme, topic, or structure of poetry.
  2. As for the number of lines, let’s stick to a maximum of 10 lines. The idea is simple: you start with a line, followed by a line from my side, and so on, alternatingly.
  3. Wondering where to write? Well, if you know me personally, you can connect with me over WhatsApp. If not, just drop me an email at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com saying Hi with the subject line as #CollaborativePoetry. We can then connect over Google Chat and create a poem at our convenience.
  4. Who can write? YOU!! Yes, YOU!! There’s no age limit and no need for any prior knowledge of poetry.
  5. Which language? English or Tamil, or both. Take your pick!
  6. If you are a privy person and still want to try this, well, there’s an option of staying anonymous even while having your poem in the public eye.

What’s in it for you?

  1. You get the exciting opportunity to collaborate with me. Need I say more? But hey, I’ll throw in some extra incentives just in case.
  2. If you’ve ever felt the urge to try poetry but hesitated, here’s your golden opportunity and a supportive space to do so.
  3. Your masterpiece will be proudly featured on this website, accompanied by a catchy one-liner about you.
  4. Enjoy the perks of backlinks to your website, blog, or any of your social media pages.
  5. And who knows? If this endeavour evolves into a book, your name will grace its pages too!

Sample

Still undecided? Allow me to tantalize you with a taste—a piece in English and another in Tamil, born from collaborations with my tween daughter and my mother (my willing partners in crime)!

The first lines were their creation, while I followed up with the next, and so on alternatingly, in a delightful dance of creativity. We didn’t have any themes or titles in mind, and yet, within 10-20 minutes, these gems emerged!

In this world of beauty,
You're my poetry.
Between both of us
An untold story
Is woven back to life
Like the dawn that never dies...
The memories of us
Stitching those distances
Makes me feel safer-
The sky, your comforting hug!

~A collaboration with my daughter

அன்பு என்பது
பாலைவனச் சோலை
பரந்த விண்வெளி
காணும்-கையளவு காதல்-
யாசிப்பதால் கிடைக்காதது
காத்திருந்தால் சுவையாகிறது,
தன்னைத்தானே நேசிக்கிறது...
நேசித்த நிலையில் விரிவடைந்து
ஆன்மீகத்தை அடைகிறது...
ஒரு பாலைவனச் சோலை
பரந்த விண்வெளியாகிறது!

~A collaboration with my amma

If you still have any doubts, ask away in the comments section or email me at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com

Ready to dive in? Let’s conjure up some poetic magic together!

Edit: Happy to share that this blogpost is rewarded as the top blog by the Blogchatter community:)

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