
This poem draws its inspiration from an African proverb that says, “Two waterfalls never hear each other.”
I was struck by the depth hidden in this simple image—two magnificent forces of nature, once part of the same river, now separated by their own fall, unable to hear one another’s song. In that silence, I saw a reflection of human relationships; how love begins in oneness, flows with shared rhythm, but sometimes diverges under the weight of ego and pride.
Through this poem, I’ve interpreted the proverb in my own way exploring the journey from unity to separation, from murmurs to silence, and the quiet hope of returning to oneness once again.
Two Waterfalls
Far away, where we began together,
in love—a single source of oneness—
we flowed through the ebbs and surges,
with tender fervor,
listening to each other’s murmurs,
singing the symphony
of our sacred love,
a gushing river as one.
Until—
a boulder of burdened egos
split our course,
and we fell apart,
twin waterfalls
unable to hear each other.
From afar, onlookers romanticize
our separate cascades,
never knowing
the lost murmurs,
the silenced whispers we once shared.
Yet—
as time bends
and wisdom softens stone,
perhaps the river will return us,
closer,
where ego’s rocks are shattered
and silence sings again—
a single symphony,
a gushing river,
flowing as one.
This post is part of the Blogchatter Half Marathon.
What a beautiful proverb and poem.You have a way with words.
So kind of you to say that, Amrita 🙂 I’m really glad the piece touched you.
Beautiful interpretation…can connect
Thank you! Happy to hear it connected, Janhavi 🙂
What a unique subject!!!!your thoughts and imagination are extraordinary. the way you expressed the pain of separation is touching the heart!!!!!.
Coming from a poet like you, this means a lot, @Lalitha mami 🙂 Thank you for stopping by 🙂
Powerful and quietly profound. It says so much about individuality and silence without a single extra word…
That means a lot. I wanted to keep it quiet yet meaningful. Thank you for seeing it Saadique 🙂
I really liked how you explored love, ego, and distance through the imagery of waterfalls. The contrast between togetherness and separation felt very honest.
So glad you felt that contrast. Waterfalls made the emotions easier to hold and express. Thank you for reading so thoughtfully, Manali 🙂
Love shattered by ego and hopeful of reunion like 2 falls who have been divided by a boulder. Beautiful imagery and description!!
Thank you so much! That imagery stayed with me for a long time. Glad it felt vivid to you, Daisy 🙂
A boulder of burdened egos is such a lovely line…a clash of egos creates the most issues.
Thank you for your keen observation, Marietta! Glad it spoke to you.:)
The poem is beautifully crafted and so true to life.
Thank you, Marietta 🙂