Collaborative Poetry: Midnight Marvels

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Today’s collaboration is a special one and I am so excited to share it with you! If you’re wondering what all the buzz is about or feeling FOMO, fret not. Check out the post below and join the conversation.

Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

You might accuse me of bias, but I can’t help it—I’m always brimming with excitement when collaborating with kids. Their playful energy is contagious, and what better way to unleash it than through poetry?

This poem is a collaboration with Aadya Sreenivas, an enthusiastic 11-year-old who thrives on learning new things and adores art and craft. She shares that practising Bharatnatyam keeps her relaxed. Let’s take a quick dive into her poem!

Collaborative Poetry - Midnight Marvels

Twinkling little stars- shining up in the sky
You look so happy, oh tell me why?
Moon- so high, shining bright & looking white
Tell me your secret for feeling so happy & light...
Talking with stars every night, dear moon,
Do you make up faces like a comical cartoon??
Hey stars, do you always go ha ha ha
When the moon goes blah blah blah?
Stars & moon, you make me happy
Lifting up my mood, even when I feel crappy!

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

This poem captures a whimsical dialogue between the speaker and celestial bodies—the twinkling stars and the shining moon. The speaker marvels at the apparent happiness and brightness of these celestial objects, prompting them to inquire about the secrets behind their joy.

The imagery of the stars twinkling and the moon shining high evokes a sense of wonder and admiration. The playful tone of the poem is reflected in the speaker’s light-hearted questions, imagining the moon making faces like a cartoon and the stars laughing in response to the moon’s chatter.

Despite the simplicity of the conversation, there’s a deeper emotional resonance underlying the interaction. The speaker finds solace and happiness in the presence of these celestial beings, which serve as sources of comfort and upliftment during times of sadness or low mood.

Overall, the poem celebrates the beauty of nature and the sense of wonder it evokes, while also highlighting the simple joys found in connecting with the world around us, even if it’s through imagined conversations with stars and the moon.

That’s a wrap for today! I’m confident this delightful piece of poetry has sparked joy and ignited your sense of wonder and playfulness!So, what are you waiting for? Reach out to me now—your masterpiece could be featured here tomorrow!

And if there are kids in your vicinity, share this with them and encourage them to collaborate. I’ll be there for them (and you too, if you need help!) every step of the way. Let’s infuse poetry into our daily lives. Are you ready?

If you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details!

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Collaborative Poetry: The Pillion Rider

Hello, hello! Loving how each #CollaborativePoetry brings surprises as I collaborate with another person. If you’re wondering what all the buzz is about or feeling FOMO, fret not. Check out the post below and join the conversation.


Before you dive into the #CollaborativePoetry for the day, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day:

This poem is in collaboration with, Smt.Saradha Vishwanathan. She’s a dedicated HDFC Life Executive Planner channelling all her earnings into social services, striving to uplift communities one policy at a time. Moreover, she is a lively and an optimistic person. Click here to connect with her.

Collaborative Poem - The pillion rider

The witness of birth, life and death is one and the same,
Where a flower blooms, the leaves wither,
Also, where flowers bloom, so does hope...
What am I looking at- death or revival? surrender or survival?
Life is forever, in search of new expressions-
Once I believed, now mere witness to fading expressions...
So stand without desire and fear
Every experience a life lesson, oh dear!
Yes, behind all that moves, leave all unto Him.
Be the pillion rider, for He shall navigate the bumps.

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem delves into themes of life, death, hope, surrender, and spiritual faith. It begins by acknowledging the cyclical nature of existence, where birth, life, and death are intertwined. The imagery of a flower blooming and leaves withering illustrates this perpetual cycle of creation and decay. Despite the inevitability of death, the poem also highlights the concurrent presence of hope whenever new life emerges.

The speaker reflects on the ambiguity of their observations, questioning whether they are witnessing death or revival, surrender or survival. This uncertainty mirrors the complexities of life and the myriad emotions that accompany its various phases.

As the poem progresses, the speaker contemplates the transient nature of life and their evolving perspective. They transition from active participation in life to a more detached role of being a witness to its fleeting moments. This shift in perspective is accompanied by a sense of acceptance and equanimity, as the speaker learns to stand without desire and fear, embracing each experience as a valuable lesson.

The poem culminates with a surrender to a higher power, symbolized by the reference to “Him.” This surrender is not a resignation but an acknowledgment of divine guidance and providence. The metaphor of enjoying the pavilion ride underscores the idea of relinquishing control and trusting in a greater plan, even amidst life’s inevitable challenges and uncertainties. Overall, the poem celebrates the cyclical nature of life while advocating for acceptance, resilience, and faith in the face of its mysteries.

That’s a wrap for today! What are your thoughts on this initiative? Does it pique your interest in poetry? Is there anything else you’d like to know or suggest for future additions? Share your perspective on this poem in the comments below!


Also, if you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details!

Happy Poetrying!!

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Collaborative Poetry: Becoming

Hello, hello! Kicking off the #CollaborativePoetry initiative on a high note as the previous blog post about it has clinched the top blog award from the Blogchatter community. Check here.


Before you dive into the first collaborative poetry, here are a few things I’d like to share:

  1. The first line of the poem is written by the other person, while the second by me, and so on, alternatingly.
  2. What you see here is a raw, first draft that will undergo further editing before finding its place within the pages of a book.
  3. There is no fixed theme or title before embarking on this poetic journey. With each line, our perspectives shifts, and so does the direction of the poem. That’s the uniqueness and beauty of this #CollaborativePoetry.
  4. Every collaborator in this series comes from different backgrounds, ranging from novice to expert in writing/poetry.
  5. To add an extra layer of intrigue, for each poem, I’ll share an analysis generated by ChatGPT. This allows you to see if your understanding or perspective of the poem aligns with it or not. Remember, the beauty of poetry lies in its ability to hold multiple perspectives, all of which can be valid.

So, let’s dive into the poem of the day.

This poem is in collaboration with, Shubhangi Shukla. She’s an Indian woman on her journey to redefine what it means to be a woman. She helps other women overcome mental, emotional and energetic blocks, rediscover who they are beyond family and work obligations, and become their most confident and empowered version. Check out her business profile, here.

Collaborative Poetry: Becoming

Sitting cross-legged between yellow walls
The canvas of my mind breathes
Blue skies and beautiful white clouds...
Nascent wings of my feminine, flutters
Is this ALL to life or is there more?
Do canvases turn concrete or expand too?
Am I moulded or can I become HER?
The boundless beauty that I dream of-
Ambitious. Persevering. Sincere. Whole. Love.
Breathe into life, breaking the yellow wall!

©www.promisingpoetry.org

ChatGPT’s Analysis of the Poem:

The poem explores themes of self-discovery, ambition, and the quest for personal transformation. The speaker begins by setting the scene, describing themselves sitting amidst yellow walls, which can symbolize confinement or limitation. However, amidst this confinement, the canvas of the speaker’s mind is depicted as expansive, filled with imagery of blue skies and white clouds, suggesting a desire for freedom and transcendence.

The speaker then reflects on the potential of life, questioning whether there is more beyond the confines of their current existence. This introspection leads to a consideration of personal growth and empowerment. The mention of “Nascent wings of my feminine” suggests a burgeoning sense of identity and agency, particularly in the context of femininity.

The poem’s central question—whether the speaker is merely moulded by their circumstances or capable of transformation—underscores a desire for self-realization and fulfilment. The speaker aspires to embody qualities such as ambition, perseverance, sincerity, and love, envisioning a boundless beauty that transcends limitations.

The concluding lines evoke a sense of empowerment and liberation as the speaker’s aspirations breathe life into existence, breaking through the metaphorical yellow walls of constraint. This suggests a transformative journey towards self-actualization and the realization of one’s full potential.


How did you find this collaborative poetry? If you want to see your masterpiece featured here, click on the post below to get all the details! Let’s create magic through collaborative poetry!

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CollaborativePoetry – Let’s Create Poetry Together

Poetry?? Poetry!!!

Did you know that there are poetries with just one word? Or that famous poems can be as simple as a post-it note on a refrigerator? And here’s the kicker – there’s a heap of nonsense poems out there, taken seriously and all!

Did you know that my debut in poetry was an epic saga about a mosquito, then a cockroach, and shockingly, it made its grand debut in my school magazine? And hey, guess what? You, yes you, can write poetry too! Mind-blowing, right?

Hey there! I’m Seethalakshmi, also known as Preethi. I’ve got a background in Mathematics, but took a wild turn into the world of poetry a few years back, even though I never studied literature. And guess what? You can dive into poetry too!

In my journey with poetry over the past few years, I’ve noticed that many folks feel poetry is reserved for the elite, sophisticated, or artsy types. But that’s just not true!

Poetry is for everyone—for you and me to every person out there. We’ve been surrounded by poetry since birth—through lullabies, sing-songs, rhymes, prayers, classical tunes, movie songs.

So, how do you get started?

To make poetry a more integral part of our everyday lives and bask in its beauty, I’m planning a little something called #CollaborativePoetry. Yep, you heard it right!

You and I can team up and create poetry together. How cool is that? Let’s bring some poetic magic into the world, one collaboration at a time!

#CollaborativePoetry Guidelines

So, without further ado, let’s dive into the guidelines:

  1. There are no rules when it comes to poetry. Come on… poetry is all about breaking rules and having fun, right? So, there’s absolutely no restrictions on theme, topic, or structure of poetry.
  2. As for the number of lines, let’s stick to a maximum of 10 lines. The idea is simple: you start with a line, followed by a line from my side, and so on, alternatingly.
  3. Wondering where to write? Well, if you know me personally, you can connect with me over WhatsApp. If not, just drop me an email at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com saying Hi with the subject line as #CollaborativePoetry. We can then connect over Google Chat and create a poem at our convenience.
  4. Who can write? YOU!! Yes, YOU!! There’s no age limit and no need for any prior knowledge of poetry.
  5. Which language? English or Tamil, or both. Take your pick!
  6. If you are a privy person and still want to try this, well, there’s an option of staying anonymous even while having your poem in the public eye.

What’s in it for you?

  1. You get the exciting opportunity to collaborate with me. Need I say more? But hey, I’ll throw in some extra incentives just in case.
  2. If you’ve ever felt the urge to try poetry but hesitated, here’s your golden opportunity and a supportive space to do so.
  3. Your masterpiece will be proudly featured on this website, accompanied by a catchy one-liner about you.
  4. Enjoy the perks of backlinks to your website, blog, or any of your social media pages.
  5. And who knows? If this endeavour evolves into a book, your name will grace its pages too!

Sample

Still undecided? Allow me to tantalize you with a taste—a piece in English and another in Tamil, born from collaborations with my tween daughter and my mother (my willing partners in crime)!

The first lines were their creation, while I followed up with the next, and so on alternatingly, in a delightful dance of creativity. We didn’t have any themes or titles in mind, and yet, within 10-20 minutes, these gems emerged!

In this world of beauty,
You're my poetry.
Between both of us
An untold story
Is woven back to life
Like the dawn that never dies...
The memories of us
Stitching those distances
Makes me feel safer-
The sky, your comforting hug!

~A collaboration with my daughter

அன்பு என்பது
பாலைவனச் சோலை
பரந்த விண்வெளி
காணும்-கையளவு காதல்-
யாசிப்பதால் கிடைக்காதது
காத்திருந்தால் சுவையாகிறது,
தன்னைத்தானே நேசிக்கிறது...
நேசித்த நிலையில் விரிவடைந்து
ஆன்மீகத்தை அடைகிறது...
ஒரு பாலைவனச் சோலை
பரந்த விண்வெளியாகிறது!

~A collaboration with my amma

If you still have any doubts, ask away in the comments section or email me at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com

Ready to dive in? Let’s conjure up some poetic magic together!

Edit: Happy to share that this blogpost is rewarded as the top blog by the Blogchatter community:)

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THE BLOGCHATTER BOOK OF THRILLERS – BOOK REVIEW

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Book Details

Title: The Blogchatter Book Of Thrillers

Genre: Thrillers/Anthology

Authors: Rehana Sultana, Anuradha Shetty, Roma Gupta Sinha, Kajal Kapur, Deepti Menon, Chinmayee Sahu, Huma Masood, Nirmiti Narain, Tarang Sinha, Anushree Saha, Dr Alpana Das Sharma, Rahul Vishnoi, Harshita Nanda, Roshan Radhakrishnan, Suchita Agarwal

Publisher: Readomania

Type: Paperback

Page Count: 111

Blurb

What goes on in the minds of people on the threshold of doing something drastic? A woman convinced there’s a presence at her window that only she can see; a collector who has an unusual interest in fingerprints of her victims; an unsettled man blaming everything on his wife; a low-caste child trying to make sense of India’s freedom; a haunted guest house room and the ghost that goes away; a reclusive and aggressive teenager who loves lizards—the stories explore times long ago, realms we never knew existed, the deep recesses of the human mind, and fears that become aggressions.

The Blogchatter Book of Thrillers features 15 thrilling stories from Blogchatter’s community writers—these tales will chill, scare and stay in your head and heart. Featured Authors: Rehana Sultana, Anuradha Shetty, Roma Gupta Sinha, Kajal Kapur, Deepti Menon, Chinmayee Sahu, Huma Masood, Nirmiti Narain, Tarang Sinha, Anushree Saha, Dr Alpna Das Sharma, Rahul Vishnoi, Harshita Nanda, Roshan Radhakrishnan, Suchita Agarwal.

Book Review

I’ve had limited exposure to thrillers, mostly centring on either ghostly tales or crime mysteries. Therefore, when I began this book, I anticipated a similar theme. However, I was astounded by the diverse range it presented. Each story was distinctly unique, revealing that thrillers are capable of eliciting a myriad of nuanced emotions: fear, disgust, longing, guilt, anxiety, dread, paranoia, revenge, tension, and more. It’s this rich blend of emotions that contributes to the success of this anthology, complemented by the array of writing styles found within its pages.

Although the stories vary significantly in their settings, a recurrent thread of social injustices and biases emerges in most of them. This common theme elevates the thrillers, leaving readers with thought-provoking elements to contemplate.

The writing style is concise and fast-paced, rendering it an excellent choice for a quick read. However, due to the story’s brevity, some narratives could benefit from additional background stories or more detailed character sketches. Nevertheless, this limitation can also be viewed as a positive, sparking curiosity and encouraging readers to immerse themselves in their own imaginings, pondering the potential backstories of the characters.

Well, that said, here are brief reflections on each story and the emotions they stirred within me:

“Against My Windowpane” by Rehana Sultana delves into the profound impact on a doctor who grapples with psychological distress after losing a patient due to placental abruption. This narrative prompted contemplation about the often-overlooked mental trauma that physicians might endure while handling various patient diagnoses regularly.

“The Last Rasam” by Anuradha Shetty, set in pre-independent India, starkly exposes the horrors of the caste system and patriarchal oppression. The narrative reveals a mother’s harrowing decision to poison her daughter’s food to liberate her from societal evils. However, the chilling lines at the end, “You are all crazy. The truth is that there is no freedom, Raghu. There is No Freedom,” leaves an indelible, haunting impression, raising profound questions about true liberation.

Enshrouded in mystery, Roma Gupta Sinha’s “The Secrets Of Nandini Rutuja” delves into the life of a once bubbly teenage girl who turned recluse and hasn’t ventured beyond her room for the past two and a half years. This captivating tale explores the intricate bond between the girl and her caretaker, culminating in an unforeseen twist that will leave you shocked.

In Kajal Kapur’s “Memory’s Missing Piece,” we discover the harrowing ordeal of a young reporter who faces an attack while covering the clashes outside Jamia Milia Islamia in Delhi. What intensifies the horror is the enigmatic circumstances surrounding her pregnancy during her hospital treatment. What struck me most about this story was its conclusion—a subtle infusion of love and hope emerging amidst life’s relentless cruelty.

“What Tomorrow Holds” by Deepti Menon narrates the story of a foster child seeking revenge, finding solace in the love offered by an outsider, all while enduring mistreatment from her own family.  What struck me about the story was its writing, particularly the concluding line that lingers hauntingly in one’s mind.

Chinmayee Sahu’s “The Encounter” cleverly disguises itself as a typical encounter episode, only to surprise and shock readers with its unpredictable twists. It compels you to eagerly turn back the pages for a re-read, showcasing the depth of its crafty storytelling.

“Fragments Of Yesterday” by Huma Masood follows the journey of a young woman who survives a fatal accident and endeavors to reclaim her lost memories. While the uncertainty about her past pains her, the eventual moment of realization goes beyond mere discomfort—it horrifies her.

“The Fields” by Nirmiti Narain stands out as one of my personal favorites, primarily due to its exceptional writing style. The vivid portrayal of the setting deeply immersed me in the narrative. The unexpected love story between an unconventional pair both surprised and horrified me simultaneously. The unique blend of poetic descriptions within a suspenseful horror story makes it a compelling read, compelling me to revisit this tale multiple times.

“One Night” by Tarang Sinha tugs at your heartstrings, evoking a sense of helplessness as you realize the narrator is a young, distressed girl on the brink of suicide. An unexpected intervention by a paranormal entity leaves you on edge, instilling hope. Just as a sense of positivity starts to emerge, the story concludes with a haunting revelation. This is the kind of narrative that lingers, sure to haunt your thoughts.

“The Dactyist” by Anushree Saha is undeniably the most disturbing and haunting story within this Anthology. The revelation of a psychopath among us, collecting people’s fingerprints as a macabre hobby to such extreme lengths is both unimaginable and chilling. I believe this story would have been best placed as the final entry in the Anthology. The concluding lines are so utterly terrifying that they are bound to send shivers down your spine and haunt your dreams. What better way to conclude a thriller than with such an unnerving narrative?

Dr. Alpana Das Sharma’s “Black”, true to its title, exposes the darkness of the evils faced by women in our society. However, the thrilling aspect of this story lies in how the protagonist discovers a glimmer of light within this darkness and harnesses it to liberate herself.

“A Husband’s Guide To Set A Wife Right” by Rahul Vishnoi depicts the story of an abusive husband who consistently manipulates and controls his wife. However, in a twist of karma, his actions lead to his own reckoning. This narrative is certain to evoke feelings of anger and disgust, as it uncomfortably reflects the unfortunate reality of the society in which we live.

Harshita Nanda’s “The Silver Anklet” transports readers to a world where mystery and mystical elements entwine along the banks of the Ganges. The story delves into the depth of a mother’s determination to protect her daughter. Beginning in a haunted guest room, the chilling narrative unravels a tale of revenge and betrayal as a ghost’s presence sets the stage for an intense thriller.

“What Runs In Our Blood” by Roshan Radhakrishnan is situated in the pre-Independence era, vividly portraying the horrors of the caste system. While this system’s evils persist even today, the story’s theme of seeking revenge to avenge the victims resonates deeply. It elicited a genuine emotional response, evoking a desire for justice, albeit within a hauntingly gory narrative.

Suchita Agarwal’s “Hartoli’s Duty” is situated in a supernatural and spiritual realm, depicting the story of a guardian whose sole responsibility is to transport dead people from one shore to the next. Beyond the captivating nature of this duty, the guardian’s interactions with the departed are poised to prompt introspection into his own actions. What could be more unsettling than a tale that holds a mirror to one’s deeds, compelling to examine one’s behaviours and choices?

Wrap up words

From the haunting horrors of the supernatural to the stark realities of societal injustices, these tales grip the reader, eliciting a spectrum of emotions – from fear and disgust to hope and introspection. The adept storytelling and varied writing styles showcase the depth and versatility of the contributing authors. As the anthology concludes, it leaves an indelible mark, inviting readers to reflect not only on the intricacies of each story but also on the broader human experiences they encapsulate.

But, above all, what renders it particularly special for me is that I possess a book that is the collective result of a community of bloggers. The Blogchatter community has engaged in the mutual exploration of each other’s works, offering both critique and applause, fostering a space where growth is nurtured. It represents a triumph for the community, and I am delighted to be a part of it.

Blogchatter, you consistently astound me with your words and actions, and this specific line from the introduction overwhelmed me this time: “This book isn’t just about the 15 authors who have contributed their stories but also the rest of the community who are the wind beneath their wings.” So, yes, onwards and upwards for more such anthologies!

Buy here

“This review is powered by Blogchatter’s Book Review Program.”

Know The Author

Seethalakshmi (aka) Preethi

Blogger| Mother| Writer | Poet | Book Reviewer

I am an Indian homemaker, mother, and writer armed with a pen, a flair for
poetry, and a passion for peace. My works have been published on platforms such as
Inkspire, Women’s Web, BeStorified, Gentleness Ambassadors and the Great Indian Anthology.

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Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses – Book Review

"Whispers Melodies - A Journey through Verses" is a collection of English poems written by Neerja Bhatnagar. With profound insight and heartfelt expressions, Neerja takes readers on a poetic journey that explores the interconnectedness of nature, emotions, and the human soul.
Whispered Melodies – Book Review

Book Details

Title: Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses

Author & Illustrator: Neerja Bhatnagar

Publisher: Self-published

Genre: Poetry

Type: Kindle

Price: ₹99

Blurb

“Whispers Melodies – A Journey through Verses” is a collection of English poems written by Neerja Bhatnagar. With profound insight and heartfelt expressions, Neerja takes readers on a poetic journey that explores the interconnectedness of nature, emotions, and the human soul.

The book immerses readers in the enchanting beauty of the natural world, where Neerja skillfully weaves words to paint vivid imagery. Neerja’s poems beautifully evoke the vast array of emotions nature can evoke within us. Beyond the realm of nature, the poet delves deep into the intricacies of human emotions, exploring the tapestry of joy, sorrow, love, and longing. With exquisite sensitivity, Neerja’s verses evoke empathy and resonance, offering solace and understanding to readers who have experienced similar emotional landscapes. Her poems serve as a bridge between hearts, reminding us that we are not alone in our experiences and that our emotions connect us to one another in profound ways.

As the collection unfolds, she delves into the depths of the human soul, delving into questions of identity, purpose, and spirituality. Through introspective verses, she invites readers to contemplate the mysteries of life and the profound connection between the outer world and our inner selves. Her poems inspire readers to embark on a journey of self-discovery, urging them to listen to the whispers of their own souls and find solace and meaning in the harmony of existence.

“Whispered Melodies – A Journey through Verses” is a poetic tapestry that celebrates the beauty and complexity of the natural world, unravels the intricacies of human emotions, and encourages readers to embark on a soul-stirring exploration. Neerja Bhatnagar’s eloquent verses serve as an invitation to pause, reflect, and reconnect with the enchanting essence of nature, emotions, and the eternal soul.
This is Neerja’s first book of verses.

Book Review

“Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses” by Neerja Bhatnagar is a collection of poems that draw inspiration from everyday life. These poems explore universal emotions and perspectives we encounter in our daily lives, and the poet skillfully captures these moments with beautiful rhyme and rhythm. In a literary era dominated by contemporary free verse, Bhatnagar’s work stands out as a refreshing departure with its emphasis on rhyme and rhythm.

Beginning with a poetic dedication to all lovers of verse, this collection embarks on a captivating journey through the world of poetry. Comprising over 50 introspective poems, these verses delve into the realms of nature, our deepest emotions, and the enigmatic bond we share with the cosmos. Each poem invites readers to pause, savour life’s moments, and contemplate the intricacies of our existence, fostering a deeper appreciation for both the ordinary and extraordinary facets of our journey.

I particularly liked the poems titled “Starry Nights” with one from a child’s perspective and the other from that of an adolescent. It’s intriguing to witness how our perspectives evolve from childhood to adulthood. While childhood is filled with wonder, adulthood often brings a sense of longing, and Bhatnagar skillfully portrays this contrast within the same starry nights.

In some of the poems like the one titled “Emotional Breakdown” with the following verses in between, the author packs in surprise elements.

The pain is all-consuming,
It's like a raging fire,
Burning deep within me,
And I can't help but admire.

~An excerpt from the poem "Emotional Breakdown"

Amidst descriptions of overwhelming pain akin to a raging fire, the last line of the stanza comes as a surprise element that hints at an appreciation for the resilience found within vulnerability, adding depth to the emotional narrative. There are many such places that would make one pause and reflect and more so, relate to what the poet says.

However, there are a few areas that could benefit from improvement. The formatting of the poems, while not detrimental to the essence of the work, could have been more reader-friendly, especially for screen readers. Another aspect that could be addressed is the repetition of certain phrases throughout the collection. Some of these repetitions may have been reworked to avoid redundancy and enhance the overall impact of the poems. A more thorough editing process would have resolved this issue.

Additionally, the last stanzas of the poems felt a bit forced and heavy-handed in delivering a moral message, more like prose. While it’s important to convey meaning in poetry, not every poem needs a clear moral. Leaving some poems open-ended can engage the reader’s imagination and sense of wonder.

But that said there are definitely pages and verses that are to stay with me forever. Here are a few from the collection:

The stars twinkle and shine so bright,
A galaxy of diamonds in flight.
Each one a world so far away,
Yet close enough for us to play

~An excerpt from the poem "Starry Night(as seen by a kid)
The night sky, a place to dream,
A space that's not quite what it seems.
It brings a sense of awe and grace,
And sets the mind and heart to race.

~An excerpt from the poem "Starry Night(as seen by an adolescent)

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Self-love is a precious gew,
A treasure that we must all find within.
It's a journey of discovery,
To embrace our flaws and feel free.

~An excerpt from the poem "Self Love"


Reflection is a mirror that we hold,
A chance to see ourselves so bold,
And in the light of our own gaze,
We find the strength to change our ways.

~An excerpt from the poem "Reflection"

Wrap up words

In conclusion, “Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses” offers a fresh perspective on elements of nature, human emotions and the mystic bond between us and the cosmos through its verses of rhyme and rhythm. As such, I recommend this collection to younger readers, such as middle graders and college students (thanks to the clean language in the poems) and also those who are just starting to explore poetry and appreciate true rhyme. As for seasoned poetry readers, accustomed to contemporary poetry that delves into free verse, this rhyming style might come as a refreshing change. If you are someone who is into reflective poetry and appreciates the beauty of rhyme, then this book is for you.

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இறுதி ஊர்வலம்

மத்திய உணவுக்கான நேரம்
எதிர்பாராத அளவில் கூட்டம்
வாசலில்- ஒரு சவம்
அதை தூக்கிச் சுமந்தபடி
பல கைகள் 

பட்டு வண்ண பட்டாம்பூச்சியை
சுமந்தபடி
பல கட்டெறும்புகள்! 

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From Screen Time Battles to Digital Harmony: Solution for Creating Safe Internet Environment for Tweens

From Screen Time Battles to Digital Harmony: Solution for Parenting Tweens in the Online Age
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Safe Internet Environment for Tweens


In this digital era, providing a safe internet environment for tweens can be a stressful job for parents. Here’s a familiar scene unfolding in households across the world. Picture this: It’s an evening filled with back-to-back meetings and deadlines, and you engage in a passionate conversation with your tween about their internet usage at home. You’re concerned about their online safety, while they argue for more freedom and independence. It’s a classic clash of generations, where parents yearn to shield their children from the dangers lurking on the web, while tweens strive for autonomy and access to the vast online world.

In this blog post, I will take you through the intricacies of navigating this delicate balance, exploring essential tips and tools for ensuring a safe internet environment for your tweens. Welcome to the “Safe Internet for Kids” world, where the journey begins with understanding and communication.

Keeping the communication open

As the parent of an 11-year-old daughter, one of the fundamental and unwavering principles in my parenting journey has always been maintaining open lines of communication. The stark reality of today’s world, whether it’s in the online or offline realm, is that our children will inevitably encounter ever-evolving threats, and we can’t be by their side at all times. They, like we did growing up, are susceptible to making mistakes. However, as parents, well-wishers, and educators, our role is to remain accessible and offer guidance. We must keep those communication channels wide open so that our children feel comfortable turning to us whenever they encounter any challenges.

I vividly recall a recent incident. My daughter was engrossed in playing an online game that was not only age-appropriate but also approved by us. However, to our surprise, an adult-content advertisement suddenly appeared in the midst of her gameplay. Without hesitation, my daughter promptly brought it to our attention, sparking a flurry of curious questions from her. This unexpected event led to an impromptu, age-appropriate sex education session from our side. It was on that day that we truly grasped the importance of maintaining open lines of communication and engaging in candid discussions about typically taboo topics. We realized that by doing so, we create an environment where she feels at ease turning to us whenever she encounters uncertainty or potential threats.

Screen-time for tweens

Believe it or not, television isn’t a prominent feature in our household. Although we do possess a TV, its primary function revolves around serving as a second screen for our work-related tasks, devoid of any cable connection. It’s been almost six years since our family consciously opted to forgo regular TV consumption. This choice was motivated by our desire to limit our child’s exposure to screen time and nurture a genuine passion for reading. What makes this approach effective to this day is that it wasn’t merely imposed as a rule; it was a collective decision made as a family. We firmly believe that instilling good habits starts with us, as parents, setting the example.

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Now, I understand if all of this might sound too idealistic to be true. To be completely honest, while we earnestly strive to uphold these habits, we too occasionally falter.

Suggested Read: The Intangible Benefits of Reading Books – Anecdotes from 10-years of our reading journey

The Surge in Screen Time During the Covid Pandemic

Just as we were patting ourselves on the back for successfully nurturing our child into a young book enthusiast, the Covid pandemic blindsided us. Shifting to online learning became a necessity, leading to a surge in mobile usage for communication with friends, studying, and discreetly exploring online games. It was an unforeseen baggage that accompanied these challenging times.

It was during this time that we found the need to strike a balance between online and offline activities. Here are several steps we took to create a secure internet environment for our child:

1. Embrace Offline Activities

Our foremost objective was to reduce screen time significantly. To achieve this, we encouraged reading books, engaging in arts and crafts (which helps clear mental clutter), playing board games, and gardening. As parents, we actively participated in these activities.

2. Stay Informed

It’s crucial for parents and educators to stay informed about the latest online trends and popular apps among kids. This knowledge helps us stay ahead and understand potential risks.

3. Choose Big Screens

We acknowledged that completely isolating our child from the online world was impractical. Instead, we encouraged her to use a laptop placed in the living room under our supervision, rather than a mobile device in isolation.

4. Co-Browsing

When our daughter began exploring the internet for both studies and play, we adopted co-browsing. We sat with her, guided her through websites and content, and helped her identify age-appropriate material.

However, as she entered her tween years, co-browsing became less appealing. We had to explore other options.

5. Teach Online Internet Safety to tweens

Open communication remained our ally. We educated her about the importance of not sharing personal information, avoiding contact with strangers, and recognizing online threats. We also made sure she felt comfortable sharing any encounters with adult content.

6. Set Clear Rules

We established specific time limits and website access rules, with strict restrictions on social media usage. Again, consistently reinforcing these limits to a tween was challenging, but we found a solution.

7. Discover Happinetz

As a recent addition to our digital safety toolkit, we introduced Happinetz, a Wi-Fi router that monitors digital usage and content on connected devices. It’s linked to our regular modem, and we’ve connected our mobiles and laptops to it.

The standout feature of Happinetz is its ability to create age-appropriate content zones, including kids mode, teen mode, and adult mode. It also allows us to set time limits for internet usage and get insights into the browsing history. With Happinetz taking care of most monitoring and guidance based on our pre-defined limits, we’ve eliminated the constant need to remind our tween, making parenting a lot smoother.

After nearly two weeks of using Happinetz, we’re pleased with its effectiveness in providing a safe internet environment for our child. I’ll share a detailed review of Happinetz after a month of usage. If you’re interested in learning more about this product, you can find additional information here.

If you’re considering purchasing Happinetz to ensure a safe internet environment for your tween, feel free to use this link or the coupon code – ‘SEETS01’ for a discount. I assure you, it’s a worthwhile investment in your child’s online safety.

Wrap up words

In the ever-evolving digital landscape, the journey to create a safe internet environment for tweens is an ongoing process. It requires adaptability, vigilance, and, most importantly, a commitment to open communication. As parents, we must continue to explore and utilize tools like Happinetz to strike that delicate balance between freedom and safety in our children’s online world. While challenges may arise, it’s our shared responsibility to empower the next generation with the knowledge and skills needed to navigate the digital realm securely.

Remember, as technology advances, so too must our parenting strategies. With dedication and the right resources, we can pave the way for our children to thrive in the digital age while ensuring their online experiences remain safe, educational, and enriching. Here’s to fostering a generation of digital citizens who are well-equipped to embrace the opportunities and challenges of the modern world.

Suggested Reads

RAISING READERS- HOW TO DEVELOP A LOVE FOR BOOKS & READING IN KIDS

RAISING READERS CAMPAIGN- MAKING READING ENJOYABLE

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Creative Uses of Acrostic Poetry: Personal Descriptions, Celebrations, Invitations, and Branding

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In the last post, we saw about Acrostic poetry, its crafting and variations. In this post, we shall see the Creative Uses of Acrostic Poetry. It can be a powerful tool for various purposes, including describing a person, crafting invitations, celebrating occasions or branding a company.

I have personally employed Acrostic poetry on numerous occasions, and I must emphasize that one of the most highly sought-after forms of poetry among my clients, especially for gifting, is Acrostic Poetry. Here are some creative uses of Acrostic Poetry:

Describing a Person

Acrostic poems can be a heartfelt and personalized way to describe someone you admire or appreciate, such as a friend, family member, or significant other. Each letter of the person’s name can serve as a starting point for positive qualities, memories, or characteristics that define them.

For example, if you’re describing a friend named “SARA”:

Sincere and caring, always there to lend a hand,
A radiant smile that brightens up the land,
Reliable and loyal, a rock on which to stand,
A heart of gold, as vast as the ocean's sand.

These acrostic poems can be wonderful gifts or heartfelt gestures of appreciation.

A customised Acrostic Poetry video for “The Venkats” on their Birthday!

Invitations

Acrostic poems can add a creative and memorable touch to invitations for special occasions, such as weddings, birthdays, or other celebrations. You can use the acrostic form to spell out the purpose or theme of the event and set the tone for what guests can expect.

For example this invitation for the First Birthday of a little master, “SUHANDHAN” :

Mr. & Mrs. Nagarajan request the pleasure of your company as they clebrate the mark of 365 days of 
                                                                                             Stunning smiles
                                                                                             Ultimate charms
                                                                                             Huggable moments
                                                                                             Amusing antics
                                                                                             Nappy changes
                                                                                             Delightful babbles
                                                                                             Hushed sleeps
                                                                                             Addictive cuddles &
                                                                                             Never ending naughtiness!

Acrostic Poetry Invite  - Suhandhan
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Celebrating an Occasion

Acrostic poems can be employed to commemorate significant events and milestones, such as anniversaries, graduations, or retirements. They allow you to capture the essence of the occasion and express your sentiments creatively. Here’s a sample of my customised poetry gift for my client celebrating their parents’ Wedding Anniversary.

Customised Poetry ©Promising Poetry
Customised Poetry ©Promising Poetry

Company Branding

Acrostic poems can be a unique and memorable way to create a brand identity or slogan for a company. Businesses can use the acrostic form to highlight their core values, mission, or the essence of their products or services.

For instance, if a company specializes in eco-friendly products, they might use “GREEN” as their acrostic:

Growing a sustainable future,
Respecting nature in all we do,
Eco-friendly solutions, tried and true,
Environmentally conscious, through and through,
Nurturing a planet that's clean and new.

Such acrostic branding not only conveys a message but also creates a memorable and distinctive brand identity that customers can relate to.

In conclusion, acrostic poetry is a versatile and creative tool that can be applied in numerous ways beyond traditional verse. Whether you want to express appreciation for someone, add a unique touch to invitations, or create a memorable brand identity for a company, acrostic poems offer a dynamic and engaging means of communication that can leave a lasting impression on those who encounter them.

Below is the link to more such poetries that I have customised for my clients over the years. Have a look & if you are looking for customised poetry for gifting, feel free to reach me at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com.

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Acrostic Poetry: Crafting and Variations

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Acrostic poetry, though sounds complex, is an easy, delightful and creative way to play with words. In this blog post, let us explore the enchanting world of acrostic poetry, its crafting and variations.

What is an Acrostic Poem?

An acrostic poem is a form of poetry in which the initial letters of each line or stanza spell out a word, name, or message when read vertically. Essentially, it’s a hidden message or theme encoded within the poem itself. Acrostic poems can be short and sweet or lengthy and complex, depending on the message you wish to convey.

Crafting an Acrostic Poem

Now that you have been introduced to the enchanting world of acrostic poetry, let’s take a closer look at how to craft your own acrostic poem:

Choose Your Subject

Start by selecting the word or message you want to convey in your acrostic poem. This word will determine the structure and theme of your poem.

Brainstorm

Jot down words, phrases, and ideas related to your chosen subject. These will serve as the content for your poem.

Structure Your Poem

Decide on the structure of your acrostic poem. Will it be a single word spelt vertically, or will it be a longer message hidden within the lines of the poem? Choose a format that suits your creative vision.

Write Your Poem

Begin composing your poem, ensuring that the first letter of each line or stanza corresponds to the letters of your chosen word or message. Be creative with your language and imagery to convey your theme effectively.

Revise and Refine

Like any form of poetry, acrostic poems benefit from revision. Read your poem aloud, check for clarity and coherence, and make any necessary revisions to improve the flow and impact of your message.

Share Your Creation

Once you are satisfied with your acrostic poem, share it with friends, family, or the world. You can publish it in print or online, or gift it or simply keep it as a personal reflection of your creativity.

Variations of Acrostic Poems

Single Word Acrostic

In its simplest form, an acrostic poem consists of a single word or a name. Each letter of the chosen word begins a new line or stanza, and the lines may or may not relate to the word itself. This type of acrostic is concise and can be a fun way to create a puzzle or express a sentiment using the letters of a word. For example, if you choose the word “LOVE,” your acrostic poem may go like this:

Luminous
Overwhelming
Vibrant 
Eternal

Sentence Acrostic

A slightly more complex variation involves creating a sentence for each letter in the chosen word or message. Each sentence can describe or expand upon the word itself. Here’s an example of a recent acrostic poem I crafted to convey my happiness and pride as an Indian citizen on the successful soft landing of India’s Chandrayaan mission.

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Acrostic Poem celebrating the success of India’s Chandrayaan Mission

Carrying the hopes of a billion hearts,
Heralding light years of success,
Aim set high, a nation's dream comes true
Nurturing aspirations, stories untold
Daring to touch the lunar skies
Reaching beyond, where eagles rise.
Another milestone in Indian history
Yearning for glory, a celestial quest-
A testament to India's very best,
A noble endeavour, every Indian's pride-
Now seeds its success in the lunar soil!

Theme-Based Acrostic

You can use acrostic poetry to explore a specific theme or concept. In this variation, each line or stanza represents a different aspect of the theme, with the initial letters forming the theme word. For instance, if you’re writing about “NATURE,” each line could delve into various elements of the natural world:

Nurturing forests, where tall trees sway,
A symphony of birds welcomes the day,
The river's gentle flow, finding its way,
Under the vast sky, in meadows we play,
Reveling in the beauty, come what may,
Every moment with nature, a gift to convey.

Message or Storytelling Acrostic

Acrostic poems can also be used to tell a story or convey a message. In this variation, the initial letters of the lines or stanzas combine to form a hidden narrative or a clear message. This approach allows for a more extended exploration of a topic or story. Here's an example using the word "DREAM":

Dancing through the moonlit night,
Reaching for stars with all my might,
Every wish taking its flight,
A journey into the boundless height,
My hopes and visions ignite.

These various approaches to acrostic poetry offer creative flexibility and allow you to adapt the form to suit your artistic vision and the message you want to convey. Whether you opt for a single word, sentences, theme-based exploration, or storytelling, acrostic poems offer an engaging and unique way to play with language and capture your thoughts and emotions. Hope you now have a better idea of crafting acrostic poems and their variations. So, don’t hesitate to experiment and let your creativity flow as you explore the fascinating world of acrostic poetry.

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