Seetha

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THE BLOGCHATTER BOOK OF THRILLERS – BOOK REVIEW

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Book Details

Title: The Blogchatter Book Of Thrillers

Genre: Thrillers/Anthology

Authors: Rehana Sultana, Anuradha Shetty, Roma Gupta Sinha, Kajal Kapur, Deepti Menon, Chinmayee Sahu, Huma Masood, Nirmiti Narain, Tarang Sinha, Anushree Saha, Dr Alpana Das Sharma, Rahul Vishnoi, Harshita Nanda, Roshan Radhakrishnan, Suchita Agarwal

Publisher: Readomania

Type: Paperback

Page Count: 111

Blurb

What goes on in the minds of people on the threshold of doing something drastic? A woman convinced there’s a presence at her window that only she can see; a collector who has an unusual interest in fingerprints of her victims; an unsettled man blaming everything on his wife; a low-caste child trying to make sense of India’s freedom; a haunted guest house room and the ghost that goes away; a reclusive and aggressive teenager who loves lizards—the stories explore times long ago, realms we never knew existed, the deep recesses of the human mind, and fears that become aggressions.

The Blogchatter Book of Thrillers features 15 thrilling stories from Blogchatter’s community writers—these tales will chill, scare and stay in your head and heart. Featured Authors: Rehana Sultana, Anuradha Shetty, Roma Gupta Sinha, Kajal Kapur, Deepti Menon, Chinmayee Sahu, Huma Masood, Nirmiti Narain, Tarang Sinha, Anushree Saha, Dr Alpna Das Sharma, Rahul Vishnoi, Harshita Nanda, Roshan Radhakrishnan, Suchita Agarwal.

Book Review

I’ve had limited exposure to thrillers, mostly centring on either ghostly tales or crime mysteries. Therefore, when I began this book, I anticipated a similar theme. However, I was astounded by the diverse range it presented. Each story was distinctly unique, revealing that thrillers are capable of eliciting a myriad of nuanced emotions: fear, disgust, longing, guilt, anxiety, dread, paranoia, revenge, tension, and more. It’s this rich blend of emotions that contributes to the success of this anthology, complemented by the array of writing styles found within its pages.

Although the stories vary significantly in their settings, a recurrent thread of social injustices and biases emerges in most of them. This common theme elevates the thrillers, leaving readers with thought-provoking elements to contemplate.

The writing style is concise and fast-paced, rendering it an excellent choice for a quick read. However, due to the story’s brevity, some narratives could benefit from additional background stories or more detailed character sketches. Nevertheless, this limitation can also be viewed as a positive, sparking curiosity and encouraging readers to immerse themselves in their own imaginings, pondering the potential backstories of the characters.

Well, that said, here are brief reflections on each story and the emotions they stirred within me:

“Against My Windowpane” by Rehana Sultana delves into the profound impact on a doctor who grapples with psychological distress after losing a patient due to placental abruption. This narrative prompted contemplation about the often-overlooked mental trauma that physicians might endure while handling various patient diagnoses regularly.

“The Last Rasam” by Anuradha Shetty, set in pre-independent India, starkly exposes the horrors of the caste system and patriarchal oppression. The narrative reveals a mother’s harrowing decision to poison her daughter’s food to liberate her from societal evils. However, the chilling lines at the end, “You are all crazy. The truth is that there is no freedom, Raghu. There is No Freedom,” leaves an indelible, haunting impression, raising profound questions about true liberation.

Enshrouded in mystery, Roma Gupta Sinha’s “The Secrets Of Nandini Rutuja” delves into the life of a once bubbly teenage girl who turned recluse and hasn’t ventured beyond her room for the past two and a half years. This captivating tale explores the intricate bond between the girl and her caretaker, culminating in an unforeseen twist that will leave you shocked.

In Kajal Kapur’s “Memory’s Missing Piece,” we discover the harrowing ordeal of a young reporter who faces an attack while covering the clashes outside Jamia Milia Islamia in Delhi. What intensifies the horror is the enigmatic circumstances surrounding her pregnancy during her hospital treatment. What struck me most about this story was its conclusion—a subtle infusion of love and hope emerging amidst life’s relentless cruelty.

“What Tomorrow Holds” by Deepti Menon narrates the story of a foster child seeking revenge, finding solace in the love offered by an outsider, all while enduring mistreatment from her own family.  What struck me about the story was its writing, particularly the concluding line that lingers hauntingly in one’s mind.

Chinmayee Sahu’s “The Encounter” cleverly disguises itself as a typical encounter episode, only to surprise and shock readers with its unpredictable twists. It compels you to eagerly turn back the pages for a re-read, showcasing the depth of its crafty storytelling.

“Fragments Of Yesterday” by Huma Masood follows the journey of a young woman who survives a fatal accident and endeavors to reclaim her lost memories. While the uncertainty about her past pains her, the eventual moment of realization goes beyond mere discomfort—it horrifies her.

“The Fields” by Nirmiti Narain stands out as one of my personal favorites, primarily due to its exceptional writing style. The vivid portrayal of the setting deeply immersed me in the narrative. The unexpected love story between an unconventional pair both surprised and horrified me simultaneously. The unique blend of poetic descriptions within a suspenseful horror story makes it a compelling read, compelling me to revisit this tale multiple times.

“One Night” by Tarang Sinha tugs at your heartstrings, evoking a sense of helplessness as you realize the narrator is a young, distressed girl on the brink of suicide. An unexpected intervention by a paranormal entity leaves you on edge, instilling hope. Just as a sense of positivity starts to emerge, the story concludes with a haunting revelation. This is the kind of narrative that lingers, sure to haunt your thoughts.

“The Dactyist” by Anushree Saha is undeniably the most disturbing and haunting story within this Anthology. The revelation of a psychopath among us, collecting people’s fingerprints as a macabre hobby to such extreme lengths is both unimaginable and chilling. I believe this story would have been best placed as the final entry in the Anthology. The concluding lines are so utterly terrifying that they are bound to send shivers down your spine and haunt your dreams. What better way to conclude a thriller than with such an unnerving narrative?

Dr. Alpana Das Sharma’s “Black”, true to its title, exposes the darkness of the evils faced by women in our society. However, the thrilling aspect of this story lies in how the protagonist discovers a glimmer of light within this darkness and harnesses it to liberate herself.

“A Husband’s Guide To Set A Wife Right” by Rahul Vishnoi depicts the story of an abusive husband who consistently manipulates and controls his wife. However, in a twist of karma, his actions lead to his own reckoning. This narrative is certain to evoke feelings of anger and disgust, as it uncomfortably reflects the unfortunate reality of the society in which we live.

Harshita Nanda’s “The Silver Anklet” transports readers to a world where mystery and mystical elements entwine along the banks of the Ganges. The story delves into the depth of a mother’s determination to protect her daughter. Beginning in a haunted guest room, the chilling narrative unravels a tale of revenge and betrayal as a ghost’s presence sets the stage for an intense thriller.

“What Runs In Our Blood” by Roshan Radhakrishnan is situated in the pre-Independence era, vividly portraying the horrors of the caste system. While this system’s evils persist even today, the story’s theme of seeking revenge to avenge the victims resonates deeply. It elicited a genuine emotional response, evoking a desire for justice, albeit within a hauntingly gory narrative.

Suchita Agarwal’s “Hartoli’s Duty” is situated in a supernatural and spiritual realm, depicting the story of a guardian whose sole responsibility is to transport dead people from one shore to the next. Beyond the captivating nature of this duty, the guardian’s interactions with the departed are poised to prompt introspection into his own actions. What could be more unsettling than a tale that holds a mirror to one’s deeds, compelling to examine one’s behaviours and choices?

Wrap up words

From the haunting horrors of the supernatural to the stark realities of societal injustices, these tales grip the reader, eliciting a spectrum of emotions – from fear and disgust to hope and introspection. The adept storytelling and varied writing styles showcase the depth and versatility of the contributing authors. As the anthology concludes, it leaves an indelible mark, inviting readers to reflect not only on the intricacies of each story but also on the broader human experiences they encapsulate.

But, above all, what renders it particularly special for me is that I possess a book that is the collective result of a community of bloggers. The Blogchatter community has engaged in the mutual exploration of each other’s works, offering both critique and applause, fostering a space where growth is nurtured. It represents a triumph for the community, and I am delighted to be a part of it.

Blogchatter, you consistently astound me with your words and actions, and this specific line from the introduction overwhelmed me this time: “This book isn’t just about the 15 authors who have contributed their stories but also the rest of the community who are the wind beneath their wings.” So, yes, onwards and upwards for more such anthologies!

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Know The Author

Seethalakshmi (aka) Preethi

Blogger| Mother| Writer | Poet | Book Reviewer

I am an Indian homemaker, mother, and writer armed with a pen, a flair for
poetry, and a passion for peace. My works have been published on platforms such as
Inkspire, Women’s Web, BeStorified, Gentleness Ambassadors and the Great Indian Anthology.

Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses – Book Review

"Whispers Melodies - A Journey through Verses" is a collection of English poems written by Neerja Bhatnagar. With profound insight and heartfelt expressions, Neerja takes readers on a poetic journey that explores the interconnectedness of nature, emotions, and the human soul.
Whispered Melodies – Book Review

Book Details

Title: Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses

Author & Illustrator: Neerja Bhatnagar

Publisher: Self-published

Genre: Poetry

Type: Kindle

Price: ₹99

Blurb

“Whispers Melodies – A Journey through Verses” is a collection of English poems written by Neerja Bhatnagar. With profound insight and heartfelt expressions, Neerja takes readers on a poetic journey that explores the interconnectedness of nature, emotions, and the human soul.

The book immerses readers in the enchanting beauty of the natural world, where Neerja skillfully weaves words to paint vivid imagery. Neerja’s poems beautifully evoke the vast array of emotions nature can evoke within us. Beyond the realm of nature, the poet delves deep into the intricacies of human emotions, exploring the tapestry of joy, sorrow, love, and longing. With exquisite sensitivity, Neerja’s verses evoke empathy and resonance, offering solace and understanding to readers who have experienced similar emotional landscapes. Her poems serve as a bridge between hearts, reminding us that we are not alone in our experiences and that our emotions connect us to one another in profound ways.

As the collection unfolds, she delves into the depths of the human soul, delving into questions of identity, purpose, and spirituality. Through introspective verses, she invites readers to contemplate the mysteries of life and the profound connection between the outer world and our inner selves. Her poems inspire readers to embark on a journey of self-discovery, urging them to listen to the whispers of their own souls and find solace and meaning in the harmony of existence.

“Whispered Melodies – A Journey through Verses” is a poetic tapestry that celebrates the beauty and complexity of the natural world, unravels the intricacies of human emotions, and encourages readers to embark on a soul-stirring exploration. Neerja Bhatnagar’s eloquent verses serve as an invitation to pause, reflect, and reconnect with the enchanting essence of nature, emotions, and the eternal soul.
This is Neerja’s first book of verses.

Book Review

“Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses” by Neerja Bhatnagar is a collection of poems that draw inspiration from everyday life. These poems explore universal emotions and perspectives we encounter in our daily lives, and the poet skillfully captures these moments with beautiful rhyme and rhythm. In a literary era dominated by contemporary free verse, Bhatnagar’s work stands out as a refreshing departure with its emphasis on rhyme and rhythm.

Beginning with a poetic dedication to all lovers of verse, this collection embarks on a captivating journey through the world of poetry. Comprising over 50 introspective poems, these verses delve into the realms of nature, our deepest emotions, and the enigmatic bond we share with the cosmos. Each poem invites readers to pause, savour life’s moments, and contemplate the intricacies of our existence, fostering a deeper appreciation for both the ordinary and extraordinary facets of our journey.

I particularly liked the poems titled “Starry Nights” with one from a child’s perspective and the other from that of an adolescent. It’s intriguing to witness how our perspectives evolve from childhood to adulthood. While childhood is filled with wonder, adulthood often brings a sense of longing, and Bhatnagar skillfully portrays this contrast within the same starry nights.

In some of the poems like the one titled “Emotional Breakdown” with the following verses in between, the author packs in surprise elements.

The pain is all-consuming,
It's like a raging fire,
Burning deep within me,
And I can't help but admire.

~An excerpt from the poem "Emotional Breakdown"

Amidst descriptions of overwhelming pain akin to a raging fire, the last line of the stanza comes as a surprise element that hints at an appreciation for the resilience found within vulnerability, adding depth to the emotional narrative. There are many such places that would make one pause and reflect and more so, relate to what the poet says.

However, there are a few areas that could benefit from improvement. The formatting of the poems, while not detrimental to the essence of the work, could have been more reader-friendly, especially for screen readers. Another aspect that could be addressed is the repetition of certain phrases throughout the collection. Some of these repetitions may have been reworked to avoid redundancy and enhance the overall impact of the poems. A more thorough editing process would have resolved this issue.

Additionally, the last stanzas of the poems felt a bit forced and heavy-handed in delivering a moral message, more like prose. While it’s important to convey meaning in poetry, not every poem needs a clear moral. Leaving some poems open-ended can engage the reader’s imagination and sense of wonder.

But that said there are definitely pages and verses that are to stay with me forever. Here are a few from the collection:

The stars twinkle and shine so bright,
A galaxy of diamonds in flight.
Each one a world so far away,
Yet close enough for us to play

~An excerpt from the poem "Starry Night(as seen by a kid)
The night sky, a place to dream,
A space that's not quite what it seems.
It brings a sense of awe and grace,
And sets the mind and heart to race.

~An excerpt from the poem "Starry Night(as seen by an adolescent)

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Self-love is a precious gew,
A treasure that we must all find within.
It's a journey of discovery,
To embrace our flaws and feel free.

~An excerpt from the poem "Self Love"


Reflection is a mirror that we hold,
A chance to see ourselves so bold,
And in the light of our own gaze,
We find the strength to change our ways.

~An excerpt from the poem "Reflection"

Wrap up words

In conclusion, “Whispered Melodies: A Journey Through Verses” offers a fresh perspective on elements of nature, human emotions and the mystic bond between us and the cosmos through its verses of rhyme and rhythm. As such, I recommend this collection to younger readers, such as middle graders and college students (thanks to the clean language in the poems) and also those who are just starting to explore poetry and appreciate true rhyme. As for seasoned poetry readers, accustomed to contemporary poetry that delves into free verse, this rhyming style might come as a refreshing change. If you are someone who is into reflective poetry and appreciates the beauty of rhyme, then this book is for you.

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அதை தூக்கிச் சுமந்தபடி
பல கைகள் 

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சுமந்தபடி
பல கட்டெறும்புகள்! 

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From Screen Time Battles to Digital Harmony: Solution for Creating Safe Internet Environment for Tweens

From Screen Time Battles to Digital Harmony: Solution for Parenting Tweens in the Online Age
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Safe Internet Environment for Tweens


In this digital era, providing a safe internet environment for tweens can be a stressful job for parents. Here’s a familiar scene unfolding in households across the world. Picture this: It’s an evening filled with back-to-back meetings and deadlines, and you engage in a passionate conversation with your tween about their internet usage at home. You’re concerned about their online safety, while they argue for more freedom and independence. It’s a classic clash of generations, where parents yearn to shield their children from the dangers lurking on the web, while tweens strive for autonomy and access to the vast online world.

In this blog post, I will take you through the intricacies of navigating this delicate balance, exploring essential tips and tools for ensuring a safe internet environment for your tweens. Welcome to the “Safe Internet for Kids” world, where the journey begins with understanding and communication.

Keeping the communication open

As the parent of an 11-year-old daughter, one of the fundamental and unwavering principles in my parenting journey has always been maintaining open lines of communication. The stark reality of today’s world, whether it’s in the online or offline realm, is that our children will inevitably encounter ever-evolving threats, and we can’t be by their side at all times. They, like we did growing up, are susceptible to making mistakes. However, as parents, well-wishers, and educators, our role is to remain accessible and offer guidance. We must keep those communication channels wide open so that our children feel comfortable turning to us whenever they encounter any challenges.

I vividly recall a recent incident. My daughter was engrossed in playing an online game that was not only age-appropriate but also approved by us. However, to our surprise, an adult-content advertisement suddenly appeared in the midst of her gameplay. Without hesitation, my daughter promptly brought it to our attention, sparking a flurry of curious questions from her. This unexpected event led to an impromptu, age-appropriate sex education session from our side. It was on that day that we truly grasped the importance of maintaining open lines of communication and engaging in candid discussions about typically taboo topics. We realized that by doing so, we create an environment where she feels at ease turning to us whenever she encounters uncertainty or potential threats.

Screen-time for tweens

Believe it or not, television isn’t a prominent feature in our household. Although we do possess a TV, its primary function revolves around serving as a second screen for our work-related tasks, devoid of any cable connection. It’s been almost six years since our family consciously opted to forgo regular TV consumption. This choice was motivated by our desire to limit our child’s exposure to screen time and nurture a genuine passion for reading. What makes this approach effective to this day is that it wasn’t merely imposed as a rule; it was a collective decision made as a family. We firmly believe that instilling good habits starts with us, as parents, setting the example.

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Now, I understand if all of this might sound too idealistic to be true. To be completely honest, while we earnestly strive to uphold these habits, we too occasionally falter.

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The Surge in Screen Time During the Covid Pandemic

Just as we were patting ourselves on the back for successfully nurturing our child into a young book enthusiast, the Covid pandemic blindsided us. Shifting to online learning became a necessity, leading to a surge in mobile usage for communication with friends, studying, and discreetly exploring online games. It was an unforeseen baggage that accompanied these challenging times.

It was during this time that we found the need to strike a balance between online and offline activities. Here are several steps we took to create a secure internet environment for our child:

1. Embrace Offline Activities

Our foremost objective was to reduce screen time significantly. To achieve this, we encouraged reading books, engaging in arts and crafts (which helps clear mental clutter), playing board games, and gardening. As parents, we actively participated in these activities.

2. Stay Informed

It’s crucial for parents and educators to stay informed about the latest online trends and popular apps among kids. This knowledge helps us stay ahead and understand potential risks.

3. Choose Big Screens

We acknowledged that completely isolating our child from the online world was impractical. Instead, we encouraged her to use a laptop placed in the living room under our supervision, rather than a mobile device in isolation.

4. Co-Browsing

When our daughter began exploring the internet for both studies and play, we adopted co-browsing. We sat with her, guided her through websites and content, and helped her identify age-appropriate material.

However, as she entered her tween years, co-browsing became less appealing. We had to explore other options.

5. Teach Online Internet Safety to tweens

Open communication remained our ally. We educated her about the importance of not sharing personal information, avoiding contact with strangers, and recognizing online threats. We also made sure she felt comfortable sharing any encounters with adult content.

6. Set Clear Rules

We established specific time limits and website access rules, with strict restrictions on social media usage. Again, consistently reinforcing these limits to a tween was challenging, but we found a solution.

7. Discover Happinetz

As a recent addition to our digital safety toolkit, we introduced Happinetz, a Wi-Fi router that monitors digital usage and content on connected devices. It’s linked to our regular modem, and we’ve connected our mobiles and laptops to it.

The standout feature of Happinetz is its ability to create age-appropriate content zones, including kids mode, teen mode, and adult mode. It also allows us to set time limits for internet usage and get insights into the browsing history. With Happinetz taking care of most monitoring and guidance based on our pre-defined limits, we’ve eliminated the constant need to remind our tween, making parenting a lot smoother.

After nearly two weeks of using Happinetz, we’re pleased with its effectiveness in providing a safe internet environment for our child. I’ll share a detailed review of Happinetz after a month of usage. If you’re interested in learning more about this product, you can find additional information here.

If you’re considering purchasing Happinetz to ensure a safe internet environment for your tween, feel free to use this link or the coupon code – ‘SEETS01’ for a discount. I assure you, it’s a worthwhile investment in your child’s online safety.

Wrap up words

In the ever-evolving digital landscape, the journey to create a safe internet environment for tweens is an ongoing process. It requires adaptability, vigilance, and, most importantly, a commitment to open communication. As parents, we must continue to explore and utilize tools like Happinetz to strike that delicate balance between freedom and safety in our children’s online world. While challenges may arise, it’s our shared responsibility to empower the next generation with the knowledge and skills needed to navigate the digital realm securely.

Remember, as technology advances, so too must our parenting strategies. With dedication and the right resources, we can pave the way for our children to thrive in the digital age while ensuring their online experiences remain safe, educational, and enriching. Here’s to fostering a generation of digital citizens who are well-equipped to embrace the opportunities and challenges of the modern world.

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Creative Uses of Acrostic Poetry: Personal Descriptions, Celebrations, Invitations, and Branding

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In the last post, we saw about Acrostic poetry, its crafting and variations. In this post, we shall see the Creative Uses of Acrostic Poetry. It can be a powerful tool for various purposes, including describing a person, crafting invitations, celebrating occasions or branding a company.

I have personally employed Acrostic poetry on numerous occasions, and I must emphasize that one of the most highly sought-after forms of poetry among my clients, especially for gifting, is Acrostic Poetry. Here are some creative uses of Acrostic Poetry:

Describing a Person

Acrostic poems can be a heartfelt and personalized way to describe someone you admire or appreciate, such as a friend, family member, or significant other. Each letter of the person’s name can serve as a starting point for positive qualities, memories, or characteristics that define them.

For example, if you’re describing a friend named “SARA”:

Sincere and caring, always there to lend a hand,
A radiant smile that brightens up the land,
Reliable and loyal, a rock on which to stand,
A heart of gold, as vast as the ocean's sand.

These acrostic poems can be wonderful gifts or heartfelt gestures of appreciation.

A customised Acrostic Poetry video for “The Venkats” on their Birthday!

Invitations

Acrostic poems can add a creative and memorable touch to invitations for special occasions, such as weddings, birthdays, or other celebrations. You can use the acrostic form to spell out the purpose or theme of the event and set the tone for what guests can expect.

For example this invitation for the First Birthday of a little master, “SUHANDHAN” :

Mr. & Mrs. Nagarajan request the pleasure of your company as they clebrate the mark of 365 days of 
                                                                                             Stunning smiles
                                                                                             Ultimate charms
                                                                                             Huggable moments
                                                                                             Amusing antics
                                                                                             Nappy changes
                                                                                             Delightful babbles
                                                                                             Hushed sleeps
                                                                                             Addictive cuddles &
                                                                                             Never ending naughtiness!

Acrostic Poetry Invite  - Suhandhan
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Celebrating an Occasion

Acrostic poems can be employed to commemorate significant events and milestones, such as anniversaries, graduations, or retirements. They allow you to capture the essence of the occasion and express your sentiments creatively. Here’s a sample of my customised poetry gift for my client celebrating their parents’ Wedding Anniversary.

Customised Poetry ©Promising Poetry
Customised Poetry ©Promising Poetry

Company Branding

Acrostic poems can be a unique and memorable way to create a brand identity or slogan for a company. Businesses can use the acrostic form to highlight their core values, mission, or the essence of their products or services.

For instance, if a company specializes in eco-friendly products, they might use “GREEN” as their acrostic:

Growing a sustainable future,
Respecting nature in all we do,
Eco-friendly solutions, tried and true,
Environmentally conscious, through and through,
Nurturing a planet that's clean and new.

Such acrostic branding not only conveys a message but also creates a memorable and distinctive brand identity that customers can relate to.

In conclusion, acrostic poetry is a versatile and creative tool that can be applied in numerous ways beyond traditional verse. Whether you want to express appreciation for someone, add a unique touch to invitations, or create a memorable brand identity for a company, acrostic poems offer a dynamic and engaging means of communication that can leave a lasting impression on those who encounter them.

Below is the link to more such poetries that I have customised for my clients over the years. Have a look & if you are looking for customised poetry for gifting, feel free to reach me at promisingpoetry5@gmail.com.

Click here to check out Samples of Customised Poetries for my Clients

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Acrostic Poetry: Crafting and Variations

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Acrostic poetry, though sounds complex, is an easy, delightful and creative way to play with words. In this blog post, let us explore the enchanting world of acrostic poetry, its crafting and variations.

What is an Acrostic Poem?

An acrostic poem is a form of poetry in which the initial letters of each line or stanza spell out a word, name, or message when read vertically. Essentially, it’s a hidden message or theme encoded within the poem itself. Acrostic poems can be short and sweet or lengthy and complex, depending on the message you wish to convey.

Crafting an Acrostic Poem

Now that you have been introduced to the enchanting world of acrostic poetry, let’s take a closer look at how to craft your own acrostic poem:

Choose Your Subject

Start by selecting the word or message you want to convey in your acrostic poem. This word will determine the structure and theme of your poem.

Brainstorm

Jot down words, phrases, and ideas related to your chosen subject. These will serve as the content for your poem.

Structure Your Poem

Decide on the structure of your acrostic poem. Will it be a single word spelt vertically, or will it be a longer message hidden within the lines of the poem? Choose a format that suits your creative vision.

Write Your Poem

Begin composing your poem, ensuring that the first letter of each line or stanza corresponds to the letters of your chosen word or message. Be creative with your language and imagery to convey your theme effectively.

Revise and Refine

Like any form of poetry, acrostic poems benefit from revision. Read your poem aloud, check for clarity and coherence, and make any necessary revisions to improve the flow and impact of your message.

Share Your Creation

Once you are satisfied with your acrostic poem, share it with friends, family, or the world. You can publish it in print or online, or gift it or simply keep it as a personal reflection of your creativity.

Variations of Acrostic Poems

Single Word Acrostic

In its simplest form, an acrostic poem consists of a single word or a name. Each letter of the chosen word begins a new line or stanza, and the lines may or may not relate to the word itself. This type of acrostic is concise and can be a fun way to create a puzzle or express a sentiment using the letters of a word. For example, if you choose the word “LOVE,” your acrostic poem may go like this:

Luminous
Overwhelming
Vibrant 
Eternal

Sentence Acrostic

A slightly more complex variation involves creating a sentence for each letter in the chosen word or message. Each sentence can describe or expand upon the word itself. Here’s an example of a recent acrostic poem I crafted to convey my happiness and pride as an Indian citizen on the successful soft landing of India’s Chandrayaan mission.

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Acrostic Poem celebrating the success of India’s Chandrayaan Mission

Carrying the hopes of a billion hearts,
Heralding light years of success,
Aim set high, a nation's dream comes true
Nurturing aspirations, stories untold
Daring to touch the lunar skies
Reaching beyond, where eagles rise.
Another milestone in Indian history
Yearning for glory, a celestial quest-
A testament to India's very best,
A noble endeavour, every Indian's pride-
Now seeds its success in the lunar soil!

Theme-Based Acrostic

You can use acrostic poetry to explore a specific theme or concept. In this variation, each line or stanza represents a different aspect of the theme, with the initial letters forming the theme word. For instance, if you’re writing about “NATURE,” each line could delve into various elements of the natural world:

Nurturing forests, where tall trees sway,
A symphony of birds welcomes the day,
The river's gentle flow, finding its way,
Under the vast sky, in meadows we play,
Reveling in the beauty, come what may,
Every moment with nature, a gift to convey.

Message or Storytelling Acrostic

Acrostic poems can also be used to tell a story or convey a message. In this variation, the initial letters of the lines or stanzas combine to form a hidden narrative or a clear message. This approach allows for a more extended exploration of a topic or story. Here's an example using the word "DREAM":

Dancing through the moonlit night,
Reaching for stars with all my might,
Every wish taking its flight,
A journey into the boundless height,
My hopes and visions ignite.

These various approaches to acrostic poetry offer creative flexibility and allow you to adapt the form to suit your artistic vision and the message you want to convey. Whether you opt for a single word, sentences, theme-based exploration, or storytelling, acrostic poems offer an engaging and unique way to play with language and capture your thoughts and emotions. Hope you now have a better idea of crafting acrostic poems and their variations. So, don’t hesitate to experiment and let your creativity flow as you explore the fascinating world of acrostic poetry.

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KOLAM KANNA – BOOK REVIEW

Book Review: Kolam Kanna
Book Review: Kolam Kanna

Book details

Title: Kolam Kanna

Author: Vibha Batra

Illustrator: Jemma Jose

Genre: Fiction/Children’s book

Type: Paperback

Page Count: 124

Price: ₹250

Blurb

The exciting Kolam Kondattam Kontest is right around the corner. And Bharathi can’t wait to participate and show off, er, showcase his creative skills. Encouraged by his friends, Tabassum and Alagu, he registers for the contest (with a ‘k’).

Alas, the Residents’ Welfare Association, led by the fearsome Mrs Subramaniam, won’t hear of it. The contest is open only to the residents of Pravin’s Paradiso Apartments. And while Bharathi hangs out at the apartments all the time, he’s not exactly-technically-actually a resident.

Now it’s up to Bharathi to hatch an ingenious plan. Will he be able to get around the rules, get past the building bullies and get a shot at his dream?

Book Review

Once again, Vibha Batra defies gender stereotypes through her writing in the delightful book “Kolam Kanna,” crafted for middle graders. With her signature style, she presents a fun-filled and effortlessly readable narrative that challenges conventions.

The story begins by immediately seizing your attention with a thought-provoking question: “How do you catch a tiger?” What ensues is an even more captivating and mysterious response. With this intriguing beginning, the author introduces us to Bharathi, a middle-grade boy from a modest family, whose extraordinary talent for crafting kolams infuses life into what he captures in it. While Tabassum and Alagu, his close friends, readily recognize and support his exceptional talent for creating kolams, much like his mother does, many others in his vicinity find it peculiar and cling to their stereotypical biases.

Furthermore, as excitement builds for the Kolam Contest announced within Pravin’s Paradiso Apartments, where Bharathi’s mother is employed and his friends Tabassum and Alagu reside, Bharathi is brimming with hope and dreams. However, his enthusiasm is short-lived as he discovers that the competition is exclusively for the apartment’s residents. The rest of the story unfolds to answer whether Bharathi can overcome this obstacle and fulfil his dream by participating in the contest.

What my 11-year-old and I found particularly delightful was the robust camaraderie between Bharathi and his friends, coupled with their individual quirks. Their humorous pranks added an extra layer of amusement, enhanced by the author’s engaging writing style.

My daughter thoroughly enjoyed the tiny kolams adorning each chapter title and eagerly engaged in trying to replicate them. Additionally, she found great delight in the incorporation of Tamil words and phrases within the story.

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The cover illustration by Jemma Jose is captivating, and the black-and-white illustrations within the book add a touch of humour while enhancing the storyline. I wholeheartedly recommend this engaging tale, written in simple language, to middle graders, especially those who are transitioning from picture books to chapter books.

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8 Confessions Revealing My Bookish Secrets

Let’s dive into some of my most personal bookish confessions. These revelations will give you a sneak peek into my one-of-a-kind connection with the world of books. So, grab a comfy seat, and let’s explore the quirks and peculiarities that make my reading journey a bit different. While I may not have followed the crowd when it came to classic novels or popular series, my unique experiences and idiosyncrasies in the world of literature have shaped my own delightful adventure.

Skipping the Classics

I must admit that I have never read the famous fiction books that many of my peers grew up with, such as The Famous Five, Nancy Drew, or The Secret Seven. My literary journey took a different path, and I’ve never quite stepped into their well-trodden pages.

Not a Potterhead (yet!)

I am not a Potterhead either. While the world was enchanted by the magical adventures of Harry Potter, I found myself drawn to different stories and worlds. Sometimes, being outside the mainstream can feel like a world of its own.

The Picture Book Predicament

On occasions, I’ve found myself purchasing picture books not for my daughter or as gifts for children but for my own personal enjoyment. There’s something enchanting about the illustrations and simplicity of these books that speaks to my inner child.

The Wordy Poetry Hack

When I encounter writer’s block while crafting personalized poetry gifts for clients, I turn to a peculiar trick. I select a book from my shelf, open it randomly, and choose a word from the first line. This word becomes the catalyst for my creative process. Sometimes it leads to poetry; sometimes it doesn’t. Regardless, it helps me overcome the block.

The Mix-and-Match Reader

Unlike many readers who prefer to immerse themselves in one book at a time, I find myself constantly switching between different genres and stories. It’s as if I can’t resist the allure of multiple literary worlds simultaneously.

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The Eclectic Taste

While my daughter’s book collection is often in high demand among her friends, mine doesn’t enjoy the same popularity. It appears my taste in literature, which encompasses non-fiction, poetry, spirituality, and even mathematics (an unusual combination, I admit), is somewhat unique.

Emotional Resonance Over Names

More often than not, I find myself forgetting the names of characters or places in the plot. However, what I remember with remarkable clarity is how the book evoked specific emotions during my reading journey and the circumstances surrounding my immersion in its pages.

The Mysterious Connection

To add a final layer of intrigue, my bookshelf harbours books I haven’t completed and others I haven’t even started. Yet, books have a way of communicating with readers in mysterious ways. Some books remain dormant on my shelf for years, only to be rediscovered when the timing is just right, making them feel entirely new and inviting me to finish what I once started.

So, there it is- my bookish confessions. In sharing these personal revelations, I hope to show that there is no one-size-fits-all approach to reading. We all have our idiosyncrasies when it comes to books, and that’s what makes the world of literature so rich and diverse. Embrace your unique reading style, and you may find that books have their own way of speaking to you, too.

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The Yoga Sutras for Children- Book Review

Book Review: The Yoga Sutras For Children
Book Review: The Yoga Sutras For Children

Book details

Title: THE YOGA SUTRAS FOR CHILDREN

Author: Roopa Pai

Illustrator: Sayan Mukherjee

Genre: Non-fiction/Classics

Type: Paperback

Page Count: 304

Price: ₹399

Blurb

What are the Yoga Sutras? Instructions for bearded rishis who lived in the forests of ancient India? Or the complete manual of asanas?

Neither! In fact, the text may well have been called ‘Maharishi P’s Ultimate Handbook of Mind Control’, for it is really a set of techniques to help us – all of us – awaken and harness the explosive power of our minds, through our actions, our attitudes and our awareness.

And not our asanas? Those too, but not in the way you imagined it.

In this surprising, sparkling book, Roopa Pai unravels the secrets of Patanjali’s compact 2,000-year-old text in ways both fun and accessible. Walk down the well-marked paths into a dazzling world where a whole new version of yourself – self-assured, fearless and free – awaits you. Go on, then – what are you waiting for?

Book Review

Whether you’ve encountered Maharishi Patanjali’s Yoga Sutras before or not, the word “Yoga” is likely familiar to most. Just the mention of Yoga conjures images of twisted postures and serene faces in meditation. But here’s the catch: Yoga is far more than just practising physical asanas (postures). It embodies the union of individual consciousness with the Universal Consciousness, representing a profound harmony between the mind and body, as well as between humanity and nature.

The “Yoga Sutras” by Maharishi Patanjali serve as a valuable handbook to master your mind, containing 195 sutras thoughtfully organized into four chapters: samAdhipAda, sAdhanapAda, vibhUtipAda, and kaivalyapAda. These sutras are a pathway to quieting the mind, and spiritual growth enabling one to perceive reality as it truly is, rather than how it appears on the surface.

With that concise introduction to Patanjali’s Yoga Sutras, let’s delve into the review of “The Yoga Sutras for Children” by Roopa Pai.

The initial question that arises is why present such a highly philosophical text to children, especially when even adults sometimes struggle to grasp and apply its teachings. But trust me, it’s the younger generation, the kids, who face peer pressure, stress, decision fatigue, and other challenges (a few words we didn’t even know existed) that need this book the most. Why? Because their minds are inundated with numerous thoughts and emotions, and the concept of simply being at peace without any productivity seems foreign to them.

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So, how can this book help?

To begin, the author Roopa Pai has done an exceptional job of contextualizing the teachings of Maharishi Patanjali’s Yoga Sutras and captivating readers with a compelling elevator pitch that draws them in and keeps them engaged. Through her skilful approach, she makes the seemingly complex Yoga Sutras more accessible, providing relatable and practical applications for each sutra. As a result, readers can apply these teachings to enhance their lives and function at their best. The book serves as a valuable guide for personal growth and self-improvement, catering to readers of all ages and backgrounds.

In this book, she covers the first two chapters, samAdhipAda and sAdhanapAda, out of the four chapters (with the anticipation of a sequel for the remaining two) in the Yoga Sutras. Even these two chapters are thoughtfully broken down into sizable chunks for easy digestion of the concepts – or rather, the profound wisdom – that Maharshi Patanjali penned down centuries ago.

What makes it even more appealing is the impeccable structure and presentation of the book. Roopa Pai skillfully ensures that it resonates with both atheists and theists alike. Moreover, she adeptly draws comparisons across various religions and faiths, illuminating the striking similarities and underscoring the text’s secularity and universal principles. This approach adds depth and inclusivity to the book, making it relatable and insightful for readers of diverse beliefs and backgrounds.

Roopa has a profound understanding of her audience and expertly provides the necessary context for readers to comprehend the origins and nuances of these ancient texts. Simultaneously, she effectively highlights the relevance of the sutras in the contemporary era.

The interactive language she employs is exceptionally captivating, without compromising on clarity or depth. The book encompasses practical exercises that resonate with readers of all ages.

Notable Features

  • The unique chat boxes that simulate conversations between Maharishi Patanjali and the reader, creating an immersive experience that feels like someone is articulating our very thoughts and inquiries. This creative and engaging approach adds an extra dimension to the reading experience, fostering a personal connection between the reader and the teachings, making the book all the more impactful and enjoyable.
  • Additionally, the “Do It!” and “Think About It” boxes, containing relevant activities and exercises for our present times, encourage readers to apply the principles of Yoga Sutras in their day-to-day lives, enabling them to experience the benefits firsthand.
  • The pronunciation guide at the end of the book ensures that readers can correctly grasp and pronounce the Sanskrit terms (along with their English transliterations) used in the text, enhancing the reader’s understanding of the content.
  • Furthermore, the ready reckoner serves as a convenient quick-reference guide, making it easier for readers to revisit key concepts and insights as needed.
  • The black and white illustrations by Sayan Mukherjee are not only visually appealing but also aid in comprehending the information being conveyed, adding depth to the reader’s understanding.

These practical elements showcase the author’s dedication to making the book reader-friendly and accessible, further enhancing the value of this already excellent work. I absolutely love it!

Wrap-up words

Overall, “Yoga Sutras for Children” impressively caters to its target audience while holding the attention of mature readers as well. Roopa’s expertise shines through as she brings these ancient teachings to life, making them accessible and applicable to our modern lives. Whether you are a parent, teacher, or anyone seeking mental well-being and spiritual growth, this book offers valuable insights and practices to navigate the complexities of life. I highly recommend it for both children and adults looking to cultivate inner peace and harmony.

So what are you waiting for? As Maharishi Patanjali has said and the author Roopa Pai has beautifully decoded for us, “NOW is the good time to start!”
अथ योगानुशासनम्॥1॥

(Patanjali Yoga Sutra, shloka 1.1)

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Writing Mythology: Key Takeaways From a Workshop with Satyarth Nayak

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Writing mythology can be a complex and challenging task. Aspiring writers are often faced with many questions and uncertainties, which can make the task seem daunting. For instance, they may question whether the mythology is still relevant to modern audiences and how to make these ancient stories resonate with contemporary readers. Additionally, writers may wonder how to represent the characters and themes in a way that is both appropriate and respectful, while also handling potentially sensitive or controversial topics. With all these uncertainties in mind, writing mythology can be a daunting task for many.

Attending the #BlogchatterWritFest workshop with Satyarth Nayak, the author of Mahagatha, proved to be an enlightening experience that dispelled our fears and doubts about writing mythology. His guidance and insights were highly encouraging and left us feeling empowered and confident enough to take on the challenge of writing our own mythological tales.

The Mahagatha author’s passion and enthusiasm were evident as he answered various questions, making for an engaging and informative discussion. His deep knowledge of the subject matter was palpable, leaving us with valuable insights and guidance. Here are a few of the questions that were discussed during this insightful workshop, which was arranged by Blogchatter and left us feeling inspired and motivated to explore mythology further.

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Q: How can we research places and/or characters of mythology?

The author emphasized the importance of research, not just for mythology, but for any genre of writing. He attributed his disciplined approach to research to his experience as a correspondent with CNN-IBN. The author also stressed the importance of reading and absorbing existing works on mythology to gain a deeper understanding of the subject matter. As an example, he shared that he had read multiple versions and translations of the Puranas while researching for his book Mahagatha, which is a compilation of 100 tales from the Puranas.

Q: Should mythology be kept relevant to current times or preserved in the period it was originally set?

The author responded by stating that it ultimately comes down to the writer’s personal and creative choice, as both approaches have their merits. Presenting mythological stories in their original form, as they were set in their original period, can evoke a sense of nostalgia and longing. On the other hand, retelling these stories through the lens of contemporary times can make them feel more relevant. Ultimately, the choice of how to present these stories is up to the author and should be made accordingly.

Q: How one should go about picking a specific version of a mythological story, given the many different variations that exist?

The author acknowledged that this can be a confusing process, but he also highlighted the beauty of the plurality of voices in Hindu mythology. He stated that every narrative has its place and should be celebrated rather than causing confusion.

The author then provided a useful tip for selecting stories for one’s own work. He suggested that one needs to be clear on the narrative framework and overarching theme of the book first. Once this is established, one can then select stories that are interlinked and form a chain of events that help the narrative move forward. For instance, the author handpicked stories from the Puranas for his book Mahagatha, constructing a narrative that travels through the four yugas and offers continuous and organic action.

The author also emphasized that it is natural for a writer to be drawn to stories or perspectives that resonate with them based on their own upbringing and personal beliefs. Ultimately, the choice of which version of a mythological story to use should be guided by the writer’s creative vision and the needs of their narrative.

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Q: How to ensure that a story told from the perspective of a mythological character is true to the character’s perspective and not the author’s own perspective?

The author acknowledged that this is a common struggle for authors, but emphasized that the key is to be true to the character. He explained that it is not necessary for the author to agree with the character’s beliefs, but it is essential to inhabit the character and their worldview. The author shared his experience of writing about Sati, the youngest daughter of Daksha who marries Lord Shiva against her father’s will. He faced a dilemma when he had to write Daksha’s dialogues using strong language and cursing Mahadeva, as he was a devotee of Mahadeva himself. However, to be true to the character, he had to put aside his own beliefs and remember that being true to the character doesn’t mean he agrees with the character’s beliefs. The audience will understand that it is the character speaking, not the author.

Q: How to make mythology interesting for readers?

He responded by emphasizing that mythological stories are inherently interesting and that the author’s job is to present and retell them in a compelling way, using language and narrative techniques to engage readers. As an example, he cited his own book, Mahagatha, which weaves together interlinked stories from the Puranas and concludes each one with a cliffhanger to keep readers hooked.

Q: What do you think is the X-factor in bestselling mythology books?

In response, Satyarth stated that it is called X-factor for a reason implying that there is no definite answer. As the Indian market has no set formula for success, it can be challenging to identify the exact X-factor that makes a book a bestseller. Instead, he advised writers to focus on writing what genuinely excites them rather than writing with the intention of creating a bestseller. According to him, when writers write with passion and excitement, it naturally reflects in their work, and readers are more likely to identify the X-factor in their writing.

Q: What is your favourite mythology story?

The Mahabharatha.

Q: What’s your current read?

The Mahabharatha– A set of 10 contemporary books with Mahabharatha Stories by Bibek Debroy

Q: How can we modernize mythology?

The author mentioned that while there are many stories in mythology that are inherently modern, such as King Sudyumna’s transformation into a woman, which is relevant to contemporary queer representation, it’s important to be conscious of the context and period in which a story is set. For instance, there are stories in mythology that may not make sense when modernized, such as the one where Rama punishes a Shudra. Therefore, the key is for the writer to make a deliberate and informed choice about what elements to modernize and what to keep intact based on the content of the story.

Q: In retellings of mythology, some authors introduce new characters to the existing narrative. Doesn’t that confuse readers about what’s the original version and what’s not?

The author agreed that some retellings of mythology do introduce new characters, which is the author’s creative and dramatic license. However, the readers should approach such retellings with the awareness that it’s not the original version and the writer has exercised their creative liberty. This can be found/made clear through the author’s note or introduction at the beginning of the book.

Q: Apart from Krishna, who is your favourite character in Mahabharatha?

While Krishna remains his favourite character, the author said that if he had to choose one from the Puranas, it would be Lord Vishnu. He said he admires him for the selfless act of taking avatars to serve the greater good (Jankalyan), even if it means being cursed.

With that inspiring answer, the conversation came to a close. It was an absolutely insightful session with Satyarth Nayak. The team Blogchatter never ceases to delight its members with such sessions and other workshops/challenges. I have done my best to recount everything I can remember, and I hope that this conversation has been as inspiring for you as it has been for me.

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