She Spread Her Smile…(in a Jiffy)

A poetry from a page of life

Line sketch of a dad and daughter in a motorcycle ride
Source: Vecteezy
A blend of emotions,
flashing randomly in mind,
with deeply set eyes,
gazing past every speck,
sitting behind the bars,
analyzing and introspecting,
whilst the physique bouncing-
with the pace of tallyho
my eyes still wandering,
out of the window-
 yet another bus ride!

Yet another bus ride...
with monotonous gazes
irritating stares
formal smiles and whatsoever...
with my reluctant self
pondering profound on things -
that never change,
my eyes still gazing out and...
VOILA!

I stopped to blink-
to capture the flash of smile...
Yes...
A red giant pulsar,
speeding through its way,
accelerated by pot-bellied man
and that's not all...

It's she who sat behind
spread the cheer...

Her dress patterned with mud,
shirt-half tucked 
her hair-braided & tied up
with ribbons partially open..

She sat with bulgy bag on shoulder
claiming her to be a school girl...
her hands-
soft & tiny 
stretching out to maxim
to grasp her dad's stomach
that tummied out
beyond her tiny hands...
But still
she tried hugging tight,
with her face resting on him,
and her eyes glimmering-
out of pride and joy
with her ride with dad...

He now grasps her hands
with utmost care and love
from his front
to bring her more closer
and as her presses her palms
with his affirming touch, 
SHE SMILES...

she smiles with joy,
she smiles with love,
she smiles with trust,
she smiles with pride...
and they fade through their way
leaving behind a trace of smile
as oft I reminisce this flash...




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தெளிவில் இன்பம்- தமிழ் கவிதைகள்

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வெவ்வேறு தருணங்களில் எழுதிய நாலு கவிதைகள் (கிறுக்கல்கள்), இன்று ஒன்று சேரும்போது புதியதோர் பரிமாணம்கொண்டு அவதரிக்கின்றன.

ஏனோ தெரியவில்லை, சில தத்துவார்தங்கள் தாய் மொழியில் மட்டுமே தெளிகின்றன .

பகிரவும், சிந்திக்கவும், இதோ சில கிறுக்கல்கள்…


வாழ்வின் வெற்றிகள்
வெறுமைகளை அகற்றுமென
வாழவும் மறந்து
ஓடி களைத்து
வாழ்வாதாரத்திற்கும் மேலாய்
சேகரித்தப்பின்
மதி ஒளி பெருகும்-
நிறைந்த வெறுமை ,
வெறும் வெற்றின்பங்களே!!
தோழா
நிலையானதை தேடிச் செல்
தாமதங்களும் தாங்க தகுவாய்
வெறுமையையும் விரும்பி ஏற்பாய் 

பிறவிகள் பல
பிறந்தாயிற்று
பிடிப்பில்லாமல்
ஃபீலிங்க்ஸற்ற
ஃபீனிக்ஸ் பறவை


இடி மின்னல்
புயல் மழை
நனைந்த நான்,
நனையா துறவி


மறப்பதெல்லாம்
மாயையாகுமென்றால்,
மாயனே,
மெய்ப்பொருள் முன்னிட்டும்
உன் நினைவுகள் மட்டும்
மறவாதிருக்கட்டும்.



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The Need for Book Reviews

What’s in it for the reader, author and reviewer

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What is a book review

A book review is an unbiased, critical analysis of a book focusing on the style, theme, strengths and weaknesses of the book, criticizing the content and not the author and also not giving away the whole story (or content) of the book.

Book reviews are meant to help you find the right book that can find answers to your seeking (be it joy, knowledge, curiosity or truth). It also helps as a bridge between authors and readers without compromising on each other’s purposes.

The need for a book review

What’s the need for a book review you may ask when there is the choice of reading the blurb or few pages into the book if you are buying offline or checking out author’s or publisher’s talks as part of a promotion? To answer in short, blurbs and promotional talks are carefully curated to impress you.

Now take a look at these two situations:

Situation 1: Have you ever grabbed a book just by one look at its enticing cover and one read of its cleverly written blurb only to regret the buy? I have done that and all I wished was then was to have had/read an honest book review of the poetry book earlier.

Nevertheless, the poetry book actually served the purpose of inspiring me in an unexpected way because it’s only upon reading few pages into that book that my husband said I write much better and that I consider writing poetry seriously.

Situation 2: If you are a parent buying book for your kid and you read the blurb, carefully scan the contents on the index page and also glance through few pages of the book only to end up with your kid pointing out inappropriate content with awkward questions after the buy, won’t you feel upset? Well, I have been there.

The blurbs and promotions won’t tell you much about the settings, the sentiments that run through the book, the feelings that the book may evoke or if there is any content that may be right as per the context but seem inappropriate for a kid to see it out of the context.

It’s to avoid such regrets and embarrassments that one needs honest book reviews.

Also with over a million books published every year and the number just growing exponentially, it becomes difficult for a reader to find the right book just like it’s difficult for an author to reach the right audience. This is where book reviewers come to play.

Book reviewers bridge the gap between an author and a reader.

What’s in a book review for a reader

  1. As a reader, a book review can help to understand the theme, settings and style of writing to know if it’s something of your interest.
  2. It helps you understand the age appropriateness of the content, especially in children’s literature it’s a key deciding factor.
  3. A good review can help you explore new genres which otherwise you might not have picked up.
  4. When it comes to books of debut author’s a book review can be the key deciding factor.
  5. An honest book review can save you from buying a wrong one.

What’s in a book review for an author

  1. It helps in reaching your book to the right audience.
  2. A good book review helps in bringing greater visibility to the book.
  3. Reviews help open up discussions around the book, thereby helping authors to identify the pulse of the audience.
  4. It also helps authors get an idea to what write next.
  5. An honest review even helps the author identify the weakness in the plot/writing and come up better next time.

What’s in a book review for a reviewer

  1. To be able to analyze a book critically and share a review gives the pleasure of revisiting the content/story again.
  2. For a reviewer, it helps as an aid to hold on to key aspects of the book for a longer period of time.
  3. It helps a reviewer explore new genres and also be open to new ideas.
  4. Over time, with reviewing, it helps the reviewer to view their own work with critical lens.
  5. If the reviewer has a good track record for honest and critical reviews, he/she/they get books for free (for reviewing) and also get the chances to be paid too in exchange of a genuine review.

Concluding Notes

With an ocean of books available online and offline, book reviews have the potential to make or break a deal. As much as it’s important to have book reviews, it’s also important on a reviewer’s part to keep it honest.

Let me know your experience with book reviews or book reviewing!

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சலங்கையின் சலனம்

தமிழ் கவிதை

Image of a dancer
Photo by Ahmad Odeh on Unsplash
பிறந்தான் அவன் அவனாய்
வளர்ந்தான் அவன் அவளாய்
கம்பீரம் கொண்டான் அவனாய்
நளினம் கண்டான் அவளாய்
மாற்றங்கள் கண்டான் அவனாய்
ஒதுக்கப்பட்டான் அவளாய்
விமர்சனங்கள் ஏற்றான் அவனாய்
முன்னேற துடித்தான் அவளாய்...

அவனும் அவளுமாய்  ஓர் உடலில்
தன்னுள் கண்டான்
அவனும் அற்ற அவளும் அற்ற
திருநங்கையாய் அவன்(அவள்?)!!

மூடர்கள் உலகம்
கோஷங்கள் முழங்க
அர்த்தநாரீஸ்வரரை ஏற்ற மனம்
பக்குவம் அற்று
ஒதுக்கி தான் வைத்தது திருநங்கையை
திரு எனும் மரியாதை
வார்த்தையில் மட்டும் கொண்டதாய்...

தூஷணைகளும் தூற்றல்களும்
துரத்தும் சமூகத்தில்
துணிதலும் தன்னம்பிக்கையுடனும்
துரத்திச் சென்றாள் தன் கனவினை...

இன்று
எதிர் கோஷங்கள்
எத்தனையே முழங்கினாலும்
இவள் சலங்கையின் சலனம்
பதிலாகும்
மரண அடியாய்!!

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Words of Wisdom From the Wandering Jew

A poem in rhyme on ‘calling names’, playful and conversational

Picture of the plant, wandering jew
Photo by Christian Petzold on Unsplash
Heads up, Heads up, my crew of crop!
With snug fit white polka dot crop top
& frilled, solid mustard, skirt in sway
Little Miss.Amaira comes our way
Heads up, Heads up, my crew of crop!

Oh! Her dark sulking eyes,
Unkempt hair with loose ties
A walk dead slow, looking lost
Sans a whistle, cold like a frost
Look at her, it’s a rather unusual sight—
Flora fellas, time to cheer her up bright!

                                  One day I’m Miss.Fat, the other day a spoilt brat
                                  Understanding me is never in their aims
                                  What pleasure does it give in calling names?
                                  Is my worth just that of a dusty doormat?

Listen, do you remember calling me "wandering jew"
And my tender friend beside, as "adamant creeper"
In an effort to help your friend identify who’s who?
Not to blame, not to shame, learn your lesson, however!

                                  Ignorance I may say, forgiveness I plead
                                  Let me know how ye greet me with smile
                                  Let me know how ye greet me with smile
                                  & gift me blooms whilst hurt’s what I seed?

Miss.Amaira, imagine name calling as a branch 
Just a part of life tree, why struggle & stay hung?
Tell me, if you were to judge from the banch
Is the mother-in-law’s tongue 
Any less calm than the peace lily
just ’cos they call it thus, all so friendly?

Let go, LET GO, there’s shade neath the tree
To sit & behold of blooms as you look up to see	
Let go, LET GO, there’s shade neath the tree
To sit & behold of blooms as you look up to see	


                                    I get, I get it! Yet after a while
                                   As I flail through misery’s trail
                                   I fear, fail & forget to smile
                                   When the dreams get shattered
                                   Where life ain’t anymore roses in bed
                                   I fear, fail & forget to smile

Oh dear, look at me, 
Today I talk with thee
& tomorrow I may die with a sigh
A weed like me, mushrooming in every pot
Is never given a place any high
I may wither or be weeded if they like me not
I still smile & talk to thee
Life is all about in the now — to be

Now come, let’s do our little dance
Sing and smile at every chance
Life is short, worth not to fear nor fret
Living in the moment is our only best bet

Now come, let’s do our little dance
Sing and smile at every chance

		
                  a twist and a turn
               watch the setting sun
         raising the arms up and high
     waving the sun, a see-you-soon-bye
                  a twist and a turn
               watch the setting sun
                        a whistle
                         a rustle
                 a spin and a wave
              together, our Miss.Fave
                    a twist and turn
               watch the setting sun
          rasing the arms up and high
    waving the sun, a see-you-soon-bye...

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How To Write Better Poetry

10 preparatory steps for crafting your masterpiece poem

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It’s every poet’s dream to write better poetry and craft that masterpiece poem every time they sit to pen one. But what’s stopping them from doing so? Is it the pressure that comes with it or is there a need to find and fix the basics right?

In this article, we shall see how can a poet get better at creating a masterpiece poem without coming under pressure and what are the basic essentials for it.

Poets and their impostor syndrome

Poets, especially the ones whose works are unpublished and who are just beginning to get a grip on the art form, don’t easily call themselves a poet.

There is always a feeling of being less or being incompetent to call themselves a poet, call it impostor syndrome or whatever you may fancy, but it is true.

They might be calling themselves a writer or even a freelancer, but never a poet. They will be creating masterpieces but may call poetry writing a side hustle. Mainly because poetry is not that rewarding monetarily in spite of poetry making it to the mainstream these days.

But does that make one any less of a poet?

If you are one who is still not convinced to call yourself a poet or if you do call yourself one and make sure you get better at being a poet, then this is for you.

Let me get you through some background before sharing some experiential knowledge through this year’s poetry month experiment.

My experience with NaPoWriMo gave me the conviction of calling myself a poet

The first time that I came to know about National Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo) was in the year 2017 when I came across two of Pune’s best poetry circles, Pune Poetry Slam and Bullockcart Poetry. I had been following their pages on Facebook for months and used to try their prompts regularly even though I had not posted it much, thanks to the impostor syndrome.

Then came national poetry month and out of some adrenaline rush, I just took up the challenge to try and write 30 poems in 30 days.

The first few days were a poetic high. I had my friends and relatives cheering up. My mind was fresh and I had enough words to play around with. It felt as though I was back to my college days with that competitive spirit.

It was certainly my first big step towards taking poetry on a serious note. I was experimenting and enjoying it all along. And then after 13 days into writing or so, it started getting difficult. The prompts got tougher and I was also going out of ideas.

But if there was something that kept me through then it was the accountability factor of taking an open challenge in an online space.

Author's poetry excerpt from poem titled "Feeling Ripped"
Author's poem titled-Ogden Nash, it did hurt, but a lot!
Author's poem on Sarcasm

After over a week’s time, my Facebook audience had actually started developing an interest in reading my posts and more than myself, they were looking forward to the poems. That, in fact, kept me going and helped me push through the dry days.

But least did I know then that there wasn’t actually any necessity to create a masterpiece every day. The point was to be consistent, explore, experiment, learn and get your idea out. Something that I didn’t know as a first-time entrant into the challenge. But that year, that challenge laid a strong foundation for what was to come in the years after.

Surprisingly, I also got to win the month’s challenge of writing 30 poems in 30 days for the prompts shared by Bullock Cart Poetry with a few of my poems making it to the “poem of the day”.

Picture of announcement of the author winning the NaPoWriMo 2017, conducted by Bullockcart Poetry
From NaPoWriMo, 2017, by Bullockcart Poetry

I couldn’t continue to write for PPS simultaneously and I just attempted for the first 6 days and one of my very short poems (written just in 2 mins right before getting off to sleep) got selected for the “poem of the day”.

Author's poem selected as poem of the day, as part of NaPoWriMo conducted by PPS, 2017

With the high and experience that the challenge gave, I continued taking NaPoWriMo challenges since then, only that I kept the poems to myself and was not pushing to do 30 poems in a month’s time. Rather, I took the prompts, created over days.

At times, I went for creating multiple pieces for a single prompt. I started playing with the prompts and enjoyed and learned a lot over years. More than writing, I enjoyed reading and exploring new poetry pages and finding amazing talents.

NaPoWriMo led Poetpreneurship

Fast forward to 2020, the foundation that was laid years back had now helped me dive into the space of what I call, Poetpreneurship. As a poetpreneur, I now help others find solace in reading, writing and gifting poetry. Isn’t that cool?

While poetry and making money have always been thought to be poles apart, I could jump into my solopreneur journey with poetry as the only capital because of the experience of years of writing and NaPoWriMo has had a prominent place in it.

More on my entrepreneurial journey, Promising Poetry, in the future but here is something that I did this year that I wanted to share with you.

NaPoWriMo-2021- An Experiment

April 2021, as with every year, was a month of poetic high with writings for NaPoWriMo (National Poetry Writing Month) prompts doing their rounds online. This year, I thought why not do NaPoWriMo with a difference.

So I went ahead to experimenting and sharing the process of writing one poem from scratch on my Instagram handle. As part of it, the first 10 days were about the preparatory steps for crafting a better poem.

10 preparatory steps for crafting your masterpiece poem

Idea and intention

So what comes first is the idea and intent. Why you want to write a poem and what you want to write about matters the most to have a great poem by the end. It’s not the starting line of the poem that I’m talking about, it’s about the central theme.

Personally, I write poems for multiple purposes, like for learning, experimenting with a particular technique or style, writing for my customised products or for prompts. But my favourite pieces of poetry are those that flow freely out of overwhelming emotion or an experience.

To help you get started, here are a few questions to ponder and reflect on:

  • What does poetry mean to you?
  • Why do you want to write a poem?
  • What are some lived experiences that you can talk about in-depth?

🤩Ask yourself these questions and if you don’t get an answer still, sit in silence. Try focusing on the emotions you go through at the moment. Be a witness, don’t judge. Let the silence in you do the talking and reflecting.

😊Remember, poetry has to flow. For that to happen, allow yourself to be vulnerable and just BE!

Read The classic and contemporary

To be a poet/writer, reading matters. To be a writer, you need to be a reader too.

For me, in poetry, reading the classics has helped to understand the richness of the language, the life crisis & evolution over that period while contemporary poetries have opened the door to experimentation in structure (at times no structure) and novelty of ideas.

For me, reading in between the process of writing helps me come out of the boundaries of my own voice/perspective and helps me look at the piece that I’m working on with newer perspectives & possibilities.

💫 Here are a few reasons why you should read for better writing:

  • It helps widen/break your boundaries giving wings to your imagination.
  • Helps improve your vocabulary.
  • Helps identify multiple approaches to the same idea.
  • Gives exposure to various genres and styles of writing.
  • It’s fun, relaxing and enriching.

😊 And yes, reading is also counted as progress in terms of crafting a poem.

Art of Observation

Poetry is essentially an art that helps us view the world from a different angle.

It helps broaden our views and to make the views clearer and specific with observation playing an important role.

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😊A poet/writer essentially needs to have or essentially develop a keen eye for observation. It’s the minute details & vivid imagery that makes for a great poem.


🖋One of the classic examples for observation is William Wordsworth’s poem “I wandered lonely as a Cloud” where he just didn’t pass by a stretch of daffodils, rather he took time to observe and capture it in his words.


💫By observation, it’s not just about the visual cues, it also matters about the tactile, auditory, gustatory or olfactory cues.


🌟Here are a few questions that can help you in getting better at the art of observation:

  • Where/what was the first moment did you eye on the subject/object of your poem? Do you remember the context? What picture does it paint in your mind?
  • How do you make the subject/object in your poem come alive through visual/emotional/auditory/tactile cues?
  • Does the subject/object of your poem symbolize anything beyond the obvious?

😊 Remember, there is always more to the subject than the obvious.

Play with perspectives


Perspective in a poem is a tool wherein you get to decide how you want your readers to look at a particular object/subject that you are talking about in your poem.

Perspective is the lens that you are going to give your reader through which they can see and observe your characters, happenings, and feelings in the poem, in detail, in the way you see them.

Say, for example, if you decide to capture the love between a couple as your theme, you can play with multiple perspectives like being either of the people in love or take an observer’s stance and pen a poem as a witness to their love or maybe you can talk from the perspective of the couch that watches the couple love, fight, unite & spend time together.

🤩Perspectives can be aplenty, at times irrational too but what’s poetry without a bit of craziness?

So try to find a unique perspective to get your poem started. Dare to be different😊

🌟Here are a few questions that can help you get started:

  • Who/what is the subject/object in your poem that’s going to talk to the reader?
  • What is the emotion that the subject/object wants to instil in the reader?
  • Does the subject/object want to talk in first person/second person/third person?

Write without worrying

There is a tendency to have the impostor syndrome and be critical of our idea to an extent that we kill the idea even before letting it breathe.

We judge ourselves quickly and see progress from the lens of criticism.


🤩Let us keep progress to be very simple here. Let it be just one idea, one line, one learning or even one word in addition to what you had yesterday. Simple.

Now why I say that is poetry happens when we let it happen. And worrying about the structure, elements or finish since the start doesn’t help in any way. For the first few days let the idea sit.

Let an idea come in waves of wonders.


😌What matters is that you start, where & how don’t matter much. This can apply to that one piece of poem that you are thinking to pen or the journey itself as a poet.

💫Interestingly, if I remember properly, I started writing poetry (for me then, poetry meant ending with rhyming lines!) around the age of 13 or so and I remember writing this: Nature, nature, nature/You are God’s creature (now don’t ask me if that even makes sense!)


I laugh and criticize myself whenever I get reminded of my first poem but then I realize, that day, knowingly or unknowingly, I made a start and I’ve progressed to where I’m now today and I’m happy about it.


And I’m sure your poem is going to be far better than the one I started with. So, pen & progress.

🌟Here are a few questions that can help you add another word/verse/idea to your poem:

  • What are the words that come to your mind when you think about the theme of your poem? Jot it down.
  • Make a mind map of the theme or the flow of the poem with only words that come to your mind at once you think of the poem.
  • What inspired you to come up with this theme/idea of the poem? Reflect & make a note.

Experiment


For any art form to survive through the ages, experimentation is a constant criterion.


When it comes to poetry, the very first impression that comes to us is that of rhyme, rhythm and a sense of aesthetics it gives us. But poetry has evolved from being a lyrical ballad or classic sonnet to being a more fluid version—be it in structure or aesthetics— with experimentation.


The best thing about poetry is it is not bound by grammar or any other rules, which makes it more interesting and a great canvas for experimentation.


Well, you can experiment with ideas, structure or your own voice through the poems. You can structure it to fit in a box or make it flow and occupy the whole page with disoriented spaces. You can make the verses rhyme or just let it sound like a chaotic crime. All it needs to be is honest and just be.


🌟Here are a few questions to help you get started with experimenting with your poetry.

  • What does the structure of your poem convey? Can you break a few lines, add a few spaces and restructure to have added symbolic meaning?
  • Does your poem necessarily need to read from left to right or flow from top to bottom?
  • Is it necessary for the whole poem to convey one single idea? Can it have multiple/contradicting ideas?

Write—every—single—day


If you are an aspiring Poet sitting out there and finding it difficult to string words and blame it on writer’s block, then I’m sorry. Let me tell you that writer’s block is nothing but a myth.

😊Just like one needs to work out every day to achieve fitness/health goals, the creative muscles need to be exercised every day.

To do so, you need to understand that you need to just write every day and not necessarily create a masterpiece every day.

When you make it a habit, you are consciously or unconsciously getting better at the art of writing, learning vocabulary, and getting creative one word at a time.

🌟Here are a few things that can help you get into the habit of writing every day:

  • Accept that writer’s block is a myth.
  • Do not fall under the pressure of creating a masterpiece every day. Just write.
  • Have a fixed time to put words into paper. Make it part of your routine, make it religious.
  • If you feel you are stuck, just write about it—how you feel being stuck. As simple as that.
  • It doesn’t necessarily have to be poetry. It can be prose too.
  • Journaling or writing for prompts helps too.
  • If nothing works, just try this. Take a favourite piece of writing from a book and put pen to paper, just copying the content. And trust me, the mere act of putting pen to the paper itself helps relax the creative muscles and gives a fresh flow of thoughts.

Hope you don’t forget to exercise your writing muscle every day.

Declutter Drill

Let us understand that crafting a masterpiece is not a single-day thing. It takes time and it is OK to feel lost mid-way into the process.

Let me tell you, in spite of not thinking, reading or writing poetry, the act of doing nothing is also an essential part of crafting and processing poetry.

Stepping away from the poem in the process, calming the chaos in your mind and getting in touch with the silence inside you helps get a fresh perspective towards your poem.

In fact, it helps in a much better way during the process of editing. A day/week/month away from the poem and then getting back to it helps us have an objective look at the poem and helps ease the editing process.

Editing is better and easy when you are detached from your poem (essential learning for me, from the recent poetry workshop by @boundindia facilitated by the amazing poet @bhagatpragya ).

So remember, in this case, no progress is also progress.

🌟Here are a few tips for a declutter drill during the process of crafting poetry:

  • Don’t write just because you are feeling pressured to write one. Just stop wherever you are.
  • Do not look into your poem. Forget it for a day/week.
  • Sing, dance, doodle, play guitar or pull out some weeds. But just don’t look at your poetry.
  • Try something different. Like, if you were writing in English, take a break, and write anything in your mother tongue instead. Or if you were penning a poem on heartbreak, why not read or write a humorous poetry/fiction.
  • Take a stroll or play badminton. Get some fresh air. Just don’t worry about the poetry. Not yet. Not until you may find the kind of rush (not pressure), the day you started with the idea of your poem and felt that poetic high.

Research


The first draft of poetry happens in a moment of time, it springs & starts to flow and we feel that it’s the best thing to happen at that moment. Yes, it is the best thing to happen but remember that the spring or the flow can actually be an ocean, vast and profound. Research helps to make it happen.



By research, I don’t mean going about researching and looking out for poetic techniques or literary elements. I’m asking you to research the subject/object or idea of the poem.

For example, when I started with the idea of the experimental poetry in this series, “Words of Wisdom From the Wandering Jew”, I was in the mindset of writing something unique and from an observer’s stance of a gardener. It was instinctive that I use or talk about this plant wandering jew as I see it grow like a weed in all the pots in my garden and I just love it.

Then out of curiosity, I googled to learn more about the wandering jew and ended up reading an article on why the plant is called so. In fact, there were writings that say many stand against calling the plant so and prefer to call it a wandering dude. It’s after that that the poem took a specific direction and “calling names” became a part of the poem’s theme.

So research helps you think beyond the confines of your acquired/ experienced knowledge. It helps you picture better and craft with depth.

🌟Here are a few tips on how you can utilize research for crafting better poetry:

  • Zero down on the subject/object of your poem and research on it to get more specifications on the character/behaviour.
  • If your poetry is set to evoke a particular emotion research/look out if there are objects/colours that symbolize it and try incorporating them into your poem.
  • If your poetry is set in a particular place, research the place to get fine images of the place. It helps bring the place alive even if you have never been to the place.
  • If you are writing an English poem about a Tamilian as a subject of your poem, research the language (more specifically, the regional dialects) and try incorporating the poem to give the magical touch of the vernacular element.


These are just a few tips but you can just go about researching anything and get your work better. Just remember not to get into the rabbit hole of simply reading one article after another. Have your intention set before getting into researching, take notes and get back at your poetry.

 The vulnerability weapon

Do you remember that one piece of poetry that made you feel intense and made you feel as if it was talking to/about you? I’m sure that one poem would have made you fall in love with poetry. Maybe if you revisit that poetry today, you may notice the magic element in the poem would be the poet’s vulnerability.

Poetries that make a difference, that touch a chord with us, that are bound to stay are the ones that are intense and honest and it’s a poet’s vulnerability that makes the poem intimate and promising poetry.

Vulnerability is a powerful weapon that when used properly can leave the mark it’s meant to. It has the power to cut into the reader’s heart/mind/soul and heal it surgically, stitching through the choice of words.

🌟Here are a few tips on how you can utilize vulnerability in your poem:

  • If you are going through a particular emotion, observe it and try putting down the emotion in words. Keep it raw.
  • Go with your gut feeling to know what exactly you want to write.
  • Putting a piece of your vulnerable self out in a poem can be scary, especially when you think it’s going to be read by a wider audience. Rather, think this way while you pen. Think that it’s an intimate letter or piece of writing to be shared with just only one person. The perspective of writing/reading to one person helps lower the fear of being vulnerable.
  • To feel more empowered even while being vulnerable, think this way that you have the power to give voice to someone else (a voiceless soul) who may also be experiencing the same thing as you are and for them, your vulnerability might mean support, a journey of togetherness. Think that way and I’m sure you will be more ready and authentic in exposing a part of yourself in your writing.

Remember that being vulnerable can be more of learning for yourself and for others too. It can be healing and helpful.

A printable on key takeaways

To make it easy for you to remember and try it out, here is a printable on the 10 points discussed above. Feel free to download and save it. Even better, take a print and put it on a wall to make it easier to access every time you sit to pen poetry. It helps.

Printable on 10 preparatory steps to craft your masterpiece poem

So there you go with 10 tips that you can implement right away. Hope you find this useful.

This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon.

How To Write Better Poetry

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The Need To Know Your “Why” as a Poet To Do What You Do

Reflections & convictions from a Mathematician-turned-Poetpreneur

A click from Author's first spoken word performance at Gyan Adab, Pune.
Author’s first spoken word poetry performance at Gyan Adab, Pune.

One needs a stronger sense of purpose to pursue their passion and live life on their own terms. And I wanted to find the purpose of poetry when I had this idea of becoming a Poetpreneur.

Poetry, as I believe, is the art of stringing words in the best order to say a story, to evoke an emotion to make one feel a particular way, intently and intensely. But how far can poetry go to change the world?

Can poetry calm the chaos, bring a battle to halt, comfort a desperate soul, bring in hope to hold on to life, earn love, make feel loved or say, pay your bill? The questions can be endless but finding answers for at least a few was vital for me to pursue my passion as a career.

Finding poetry in rhymes & chants

As someone lured to words, the sounds it evoked, the unseen rhythm & harmony it brought along, poetry had always been a part of my life. Be it in the nursery rhymes sung by Preeti Sagar, or in the rhythm from the stressed & unstressed syllables while chanting shlokas or in the beats of an unworded song of silence that I feel inside of me all the time, poetry has always had me enraptured.

There was always a kind of urge to pen down feelings and find ways to encapsulate even the everyday incidents in something extraordinary. And I did it in verses. Believe me or not, when I started out I was mad enough to capture even mosquitoes and cockroaches in creative imaginations just for fun. And of course, nature was my first love, thanks to my alma mater, Madras Christian College, know for its scrub jungle.

What started just as a passion, a way of expression soon turned out to be the compass of my life. Consciously or unconsciously I was seeking poetry to understand the complexities of life and trust me, poetry has led me to better places.

Gitanjali-Biggest influence on my poetry (and life) journey

Rabindranath Tagore’s Gitanjali is one of the biggest influences on my poetry (and life) journey and honestly, I don’t remember how I landed up with this book. But one thing that I clearly remember is that the very first poem in it had me in tears. Here is that piece:

Thou hast made me endless, such is thy pleasure,
This is my prayer to thee, my Lord-strike,
strike at the root of penury in my heart,
Clouds heap upon clouds and it darkens

Thou hast made me endless, such is thy pleasure
Thou hast made me endless, such is thy pleasure.
This frail vessel thou emptiest again and again,
and fillest it ever with fresh life.

This little flute of a reed thou hast carried over hills and dales,
and hast breathed through it melodies eternally new.
At the immortal touch of thy hands
my little heart loses its limits in joy
and gives birth to utterance ineffable.

Thy infinite gifts come to me
only on these very small hands of mine.
Ages pass, and still thou pourest,
and still there is room to fill.
— Tagore

More interestingly, I couldn’t move on to the rest of the poems and I didn’t force myself to do so too. I sat with the poem.  Some poems come to you to prepare you for an intense experience while some others come in as an assurance that your path is headed the right way. Gitanjali has poems that make me feel both ways.


You may read the review of Gitanjali in the post below.


Poetry & its various perspectives

That cannot-be-worded, cannot-be-explained, cannot-be-seen kind of intense and intimate feeling that poetry brings along is what makes me want to read, write and gift poetry. There’s a magic in the kind of mysticism that every poem holds. It can shed light on different perspectives and an honest poem also holds the potential to even make you a different person in a single verse.

For example, the following lines,

“For men may come and men may go,

But I go on for ever.”

from the poem The Brook, by Alfred Lord Tennyson, has grown upon me with its ability to bring our various perspectives as follows:

In my schooling years, upon my first read, I took upon to its literal meaning like even if we human beings visit the Brook or not, it is going to keep flowing. I must say, at that time, I was lured to the music of the poem, the rhyme and rhythm that I didn’t look beyond this perspective.

When I was in college, I got to a place where the repetition of the line would give me an assurance that in spite of broken relationships, I can still go on with life. The line came as a comfort for my bruised heart and made me take it all lightly and move forward.

In my early twenties, the profoundness of the line left me awestruck. It’s only then I got the metaphorical meaning of the eternal existence of nature as against the impermanence of human lives.

And as I write this, there is a new perspective coming along. What if the “I” in the line is a symbolism of our soul? Doesn’t it make more sense? Our bodies (symbolized as men, here) will perish but the soul, the vital force of our existence, is for eternity. Wow! Poetry never fails to amaze me.

But wait, can amazement alone bring about a change?

I bet, it does. A single poem or even better, a single powerful verse is like a viable seed that can grow upon you in years, bearing the fruits of change rooted in profound perspectives. That is poetry for you.

Key takeaways

  1. Poetry can change the world, one person at a time (in case of page poetry) or one gathering at a time (in case of spoken word poetry).
  2. It helps shed many inhibitions, get clarity and also think laterally.
  3. Poetry holds the potential to bring in peace or start a protest; better handled with care!
  4. With its ability to hold different perspectives it only gets better with time.
  5. Poetry helps in appreciating the world around and the inside of us with much more intimacy.
  6. And if you ask me if it can help paying your bills, well, with technology at hand, it certainly can help earn a decent income. This endeavor, Promising Poetry, is an example (more on that in upcoming posts). A glimpse of how I do this is here.

Well, if you want to know what a promising poetry has to say, then read this.

May poetry find its way to the doors or atleast windows of your heart.

This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon. The prompt “What if the world didn’t have art (poetry, here)”, made me take this perspective.

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Who am I?

I thought poetry was complex until I started to try understanding and identifying myself. Who am I? Do I know myself completely? I don’t think so but I’m sure I’m at least at it, trying to know. And I understand it’s ever-evolving. So here is my reflection poetry on my identity.

My first try with oil painting!

I was born in Chennai. Spent the first 6 years in Orissa. Shifted to Chennai again-childhood, teenage & higher education happened here. Marriage happened & moved to Pune. Life happened. The change took over. Here in Bangalore for the past 3 years. Am I a wanderlust? I says, neti neti.

I nest in numbers. Topology interests me. Taylor’s series terrifies me and yet I teach both. Math amuses me. Fractals find my friendship. Am I a mathematician? I says, neti neti.

I cook meals. Budget buys. Parlour papaya-peels pack. Dust doors. Scrub sinks. Wash whites & clothes colored. Am I a homemaker? I says, neti neti.

I help with homework. Tailor her timetable. Take to skates. Say stories. Share secrets. Play puddles. Dress dolls. Dream days. Nestle nights. Hug & hear. Kiss & care. Am I a mother? I says, neti neti.

I grow greens. Climbers. Creepers. Cultivate. Prune. Protect. I compost. Maintain maggots & enrich earthworms. Creepy crawlies come and go. I care for caterpillars. Behold butterflies. Water or wait for rain. Weed. Watch wandering jew grow. Am I a gardener? I says, neti neti.

I bleed. Bruises border. Platelets plummet. Purpura paints. Identify ITP. Fight fatigue. Survive steroids. Track tiredness. Deny death. Am I a warrior? I says, neti neti.

I pen poetries. Read rhapsodies. See similes. Mean metaphors. Pursue passion. Reveal reflections. Am I a poet? I says, neti neti.

I weave words. Personalize poetries. Bridge bonding. Exhibit empathy. Engineer expressions. Craft craziness. Customize cards. Sell stanzas. Experiment. Earn. Am I an entrepreneur? I says, neti neti. I says, neti neti.         

I says, neti neti.           

Who is I then?                            

A human being?        

A being?        

being?    

b-e-i-n-g

be-i

i.

P.S. The phrase neti neti (नेति नेति) is a Sanskrit expression which means ‘not this, not that’ and has its roots in the Vedic Upanishads.

                                                                                                                                                                

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Promising Poetry

What if promising poetry had a voice and spoke to you?

Have you ever wondered what does poetry mean? What makes for promising poetry? Does poetry have a song of its own to sing? A story of its own to stay?

Well, we have all grown up reciting rhymes, chanting shlokas, singing prayers, listening to songs and experimenting with our own verses, and maybe part of education or as part of our faith or simply to have fun. But least did we know that we were all experiencing, appreciating and learning poetry in its various forms since our formative years. Poetry has been a part of our lives in some way or the other though it might be only a few who consciously seek solace in poetry and appreciate it. So, what makes a piece of writing poetry? Is it the rhyme or rhythm? The brevity or the allegory? Is it music or mysticism? What makes a piece of writing poetry? Can poetry even be defined precisely?

Fluidity of poetry

Well, poetry is the fluidity with solid substance to it. Honest poetry flows even while its essence stays forever. Poetry can mean protest and peace at the same time. Like energy, poetry can neither be created nor destroyed. Poetry just happens. The truth that it carries, the emotions it holds happen as revelations in every poet’s first drafts. The poet is just a medium, a mere tool allowing the revelation to see the light of this world. And that first draft, with all its nakedness and vulnerability, is the essence of the poem. THAT IS POETRY. The rest of the editing and polishing is mere crafting.

Crafting Poetry?

I’m sure the poet in you will agree to call the first draft sacred and hold close the time and moment the revelations happen. But does that mean editing will make the piece any less of poetry? Definitely not. It just makes the truth more presentable, even if it’s as hard as hitting a nail on the head. In fact, poetry is a beautiful way of holding the truth in its various manifestations from time to time, be it in its allegories or metaphors. This mysticism and revelations that poetry has always had made me seek poetry in the first place.

A seeking, a solace

Promising Poetry is an attempt at appreciating various aspects of poetry and a place to let my poetic expressions live and thrive. Poetry for me is a seeking and solace. Here is one such poem, ‘The Song of a Promising Poetry’, that happened as a revelation and comes here with the least editing. What if poetry has a voice? What is it that it wants to tell you? I hope this poem talks to you as much as it spoke to me. Maybe it gets to say a totally different story when you read and it’s ok too, for that is what poetry is meant to be. Feel free to interpret in your own way. I hope you enjoy reading it and hearing what it has to say to you, secretly.

The Song Of A Promising Poetry

 i’m the mistaken music
 of your first cry—
 miracle they say
 but i am the sleep
 that you just woke up from
 with a cry—
  an interlude 
 echoing cacophony
  
 i'm the silence of the soul
 the melody 
 the melancholy
 the mysticism 
 the marvel
  
 i’m no miracle
 my Master is.
  
 i’m the sleep
 that you lost
 in the clamor of conviction
 ugly glamour 
 that can’t conceal
 dark circles of ignorance
  
 i’m the voice of voiceless
 parched throat 
 draining dilemma
 drowning dream
 deserted death
 i’m the harbinger of hope
  
 i’m the symphony of syllables
 stringed in silence—
 a gut’s guide
 a survivor’s scream
 the triumphant truth—
 a spandex stitched
 of spontaneity
 taking the shape of your soul
 like amoeba—
 a single entity
  
   i’m my Master’s make
 His ego & slave
 symbol of surrender
 i’m the source & sink
 of fountaining freedom
 fierce
 faceless
 frameless
  unfathomable faith
 faint hearted—
 fade away
  
   

P.S. Meanwhile, I can help you in communicating your emotions in poetic expressions, effortlessly. Just in case if you want your expressions to find a poetic reveal, be it as a gift for yourself or your loved ones, do check out here for customised poetry gifting options.

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If Only You Wake Up To Become the Sunlight

Copyright @Author
 Accept it!
 it’s in your
 every night dreams
 revealing romanticisms
 lustful longings
 hushed hopes
 to wake up with her
 every dawn,
 & by the day
 as she comes to you,
 you look upon her
 like a mistress 
 walking down in wild nakedness 
 heralding a reveal
 of your deepest secrets
 and you,
 you stand puzzled
 in denial…
 in denial of 
 her power
 her intensity
 her valiance
 her grandeur
 her eternity
 you stand puzzled
 in denial 
 cursing your zipped lips
 & locked desires 
 calling it all barmecidal,
 deceiving the damsel
 as a damage to your dignity
 as you see through 
 the filtered screen 
 of egoism
 of eroticism
 of chauvinism
 missing out on all the essence
 worth the eternity…
 dear man,
 you belittle yourself
 caught in the maze 
 of a mocking illusion
 but
 dear man,
 as she walks away tonight
 her profound gaze
 promises you of a reveal-
 the triumphant truth 
 tomorrow
 if only,
 if only you wake up to
 become the sunlight…
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